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Limericks 2022

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Achoo, Achoo, Aaargh-choo!"
A book of limericks

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh dear, this poor gal suffered, that is an amazing photograph of a big potato which has inspired you to write this fine Limerick Debra, you are on a roll here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-May-2022


reply by the author on 16-May-2022
    LOL! It's huge, isn't it?!
    Thank you for your feedback, Dolly :)
    Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from robyn corum
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Debra,

Now, THAT is a TATER! hahahaha Wowzer. This was a fun little limerick, clicked! I enjoyed the fun of it and the poetic devices you still managed to insert. There was lots and lots of 'g', 't', and 's' alliteration going on in there!

You had a few other fun things going on, too. You made me smile. Thanks for that. Hugs-

 Comment Written 14-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Aw, glad to share a smile with you, Robyn, and happy you enjoyed the read :)
    Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Heather Knight
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Yeah, it must be quite disappointing to give birth to a potato... Better than an alien anyway.
This is hilarious. I've always been fond of limericks even though I wouldn't be able to write one myself.
What came first: the pic or the poem?
Anyway it's great. A lot of fun.
Thanks so much for making me smile with your craft. Quite necessary right now.

 Comment Written 14-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    LOL! Glad you enjoyed the read and that it cheered you a little :)
    The picture definitely came first... my imagination isn't that crazy!
    Thanks so much for your feedback - I'm in a limerick groove at the moment - my last 3 writes being in that style ;)
    Talk later xx
reply by Heather Knight on 14-May-2022
    I'm glad you are in a limerick groove. I'm in an exam/student obsession one. 😀
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    LOL!
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ha, very entertaining limerick here. That certainly is one giant potato, enough to feed a family of five for a month.

Excellent rhythm and rhyme here, and where did you find that absolutely perfect photograph?

Much enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 14-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Hi Gloria :)
    Glad you enjoyed my silliness! I just did a search for 'funny vintage photos' and this is one that came up... I couldn't pass it by!
    Thanks for your feedback :)
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Achoo, Achoo, Aaargh-choo!
by Debra White

Excellent Limerick poem. The picture made me laugh. Good limerick form. Omg, I can't imagine that huge potato on my toes. Hahaha.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 13-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    LOL! Thanks for your feedback, Gypsy :)
    Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick, Achoo, Achoo, Aaargh-choo!, has the general formatting and reminds the readers who may be allergic to giant potatoes to always wear steel-toed boots

 Comment Written 13-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    LOL! Thank you for your funny feedback, Bill :)
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Erika Seshadri
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Ha! Oh my goodness... I'm not sure which is funnier, the poem or the photo. Needless to say, they are perfect together.

Very cute. Thanks for sharing.

Erika

 Comment Written 13-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Thank you so much, Erika :) Glad you enjoyed the read!
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh no! Lol. Where are you finding these bizarre pictures? And you are having some fun making light of the possibilities with limericks. I don't know if a tater that size would be edible. Lol.

 Comment Written 13-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    LOL - I seem to have found myself in a limerick groove!
    Needless to say, the picture came first ;) - I'm having great fun scrolling google for 'funny vintage pics'... get ready for more LOL!
    Thanks for reading :)
    Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from royowen
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Is that a giant spud? If one was going to have a roast, then the potatoes would feed the whole village! A beautifully written Limerick Debra, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Thank you so much, Roy :) It must've taken some digging up!
    Best wishes, Debra x
reply by royowen on 14-May-2022
    You can say that again
Comment from karenina
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This SPUDS for you? Zowie. That's one huge potato! Look at you all full of limericks and sharing them with a smile! Love your title: I had NO idea where this was going! Hmmm. Baked? It'd need a lot of butter and sour cream! I'm getting hungry now...

Grin.

Karenina

 Comment Written 13-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Mmmmm - the best way to eat a jacket potato, yum!
    Really enjoying being stuck in a limerick groove these past couple of days - thanks for reading!
    Best wishes as always, Debra x