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Nonsense

last night my mind went into overdrive

6 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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It's so frustrating when that happens. One has original,creative and vivid dreams - but they disappear on waking. You have captured that well in your poem. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-May-2022


reply by the author on 18-May-2022
    Goodnight, Down thar. Since it is 7am in N Carolina it would be... 11pm down under? Sleep tight. Don't let the bed bugs bite. An idiom said to children as we lay them to rest for the night.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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You have tried to express everything you saw, felt or thought last night as you remember how your mind went into overdrive and how anomalous you thought overdrive, now you call it nonsense for you can't express or find the links; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)

 Comment Written 16-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    A mind at rest isn't worth its salt.
Comment from jessizero
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Have you ever read Neil Gaiman's Sandman? In the land of dreams, there is a library of every book ever written in dreams. Your poem reminded me of that. How great would that be? I like the nonsense you've written here, though. Thank you so much for sharing!

 Comment Written 16-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Think nothing of it as I did while I slept I guess.
Comment from Regina Elliott
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Wow, very impressive with an
imaginative dreamscape of
thoughts and imagery. I can
commiserate on staying up
with penning in my head at
times. Warmest wishes for
the contest. All the best. ~

 Comment Written 16-May-2022


reply by the author on 16-May-2022
    U mean? I am not one of a kind? Drabnabit
Comment from Fleedleflump
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I love a bit of stream of consciousness, floating from mind to fingers to screen with as little interference as possible from that pesky brain thingy. I enjoyed following along with your word montage while you set the route and pace for me :-).

Mike

 Comment Written 16-May-2022


reply by the author on 16-May-2022
    And you are kind to tell me. A montage,eh?
Comment from royowen
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I think memory can be recalled quite by an act of the will, but then again, most of my childhood, certainly don't react to an act of will, so no, I'm wroing. This is beautifully written, what was obscure, is beautifully written and clear, Judy loved this, well done, articulate and good, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-May-2022


reply by the author on 16-May-2022
    Thank you and please extend my appreciation to Judy.
reply by royowen on 16-May-2022
    Well done