Scene at a Presidential Run 12
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
What a lot of problems just ordering drinks. Very amusing and such pains in the butt for the server. Very well-written and enjoyable. In Ned's first line, do you really mean "depreciate"?
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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What a lot of problems just ordering drinks. Very amusing and such pains in the butt for the server. Very well-written and enjoyable. In Ned's first line, do you really mean "depreciate"?
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2022
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Ned tends to use the wrong word or mongrelize words when he speaks.
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Ned tends to use the wrong word or mongrelize words when he speaks.
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Good choice of words. Is Ned really smart enough to be president? He is smart enough not to get involved in the one making the waiter suffer.
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
Wow! I had no idea it was THAT kinda jirnt. Swallered and spit milk? Do you know what that goes fer 'round here??? Yeah, me neither. Can't touch it. My hubby don't make enuff.
Wow. WowZER! Them fellers is livin' high cotton!
More!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Bill,
Wow! I had no idea it was THAT kinda jirnt. Swallered and spit milk? Do you know what that goes fer 'round here??? Yeah, me neither. Can't touch it. My hubby don't make enuff.
Wow. WowZER! Them fellers is livin' high cotton!
More!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Robyn.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You're always good for a chuckle or two, so I'm going to start saving all your posts to read first thing in the morning. Hoping your humor will keep me laughing all life's aggravations. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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You're always good for a chuckle or two, so I'm going to start saving all your posts to read first thing in the morning. Hoping your humor will keep me laughing all life's aggravations. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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High praise. Thanks, Ric
Comment from royowen
Heh heh. I think we've all been there, settling for what would normally be way down our list of priorities ever, but these folk are familiarising with realities, when luxury, (still well off mind you) well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Heh heh. I think we've all been there, settling for what would normally be way down our list of priorities ever, but these folk are familiarising with realities, when luxury, (still well off mind you) well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from kahpot
Well my friend, you, Pons, Ned, and the gang have not lost any humor, even though I thought the (lingo) was a bit more straight than normal I thoroughly enjoyed this one, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Well my friend, you, Pons, Ned, and the gang have not lost any humor, even though I thought the (lingo) was a bit more straight than normal I thoroughly enjoyed this one, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you, kahpot. I guess Ned didn't talk much so everyone could be understood.
Comment from judiverse
They always go to better restaurants than that on Fox and Friends. Image is everything, so Ned should pick a better place. Thomas Edison is a great name for a media specialist. The server is a terrible spokesperson for his restaurant. At least Ned has youth on his side. and that's in his favor after Trump and Biden. judi
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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They always go to better restaurants than that on Fox and Friends. Image is everything, so Ned should pick a better place. Thomas Edison is a great name for a media specialist. The server is a terrible spokesperson for his restaurant. At least Ned has youth on his side. and that's in his favor after Trump and Biden. judi
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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I would blame Neil Nave, the campaign manager.
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Right! It's always good strategy to have someone to blame. judi
Comment from Tina Crute
Hahaha! The "fresh" lemonade was made three days ago. I almost laughed out loud, but my hubby is taking a nap nearby! And that was just one of the many sarcastic jokes that I loved!
This is fast-moving, funny and I am surprised how you made that happen, like I read it quick as people would be saying these things and it was enjoyable!
Great write in my opinion! I am ready for more!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Hahaha! The "fresh" lemonade was made three days ago. I almost laughed out loud, but my hubby is taking a nap nearby! And that was just one of the many sarcastic jokes that I loved!
This is fast-moving, funny and I am surprised how you made that happen, like I read it quick as people would be saying these things and it was enjoyable!
Great write in my opinion! I am ready for more!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Tina. I will put another out tonight.
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Thank you, Tina. I will put another out tonight.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Well, this is a weird sort of script. the dialogue is done very well and the conversations are easy to follow. I found it hilarious is some places. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Well, this is a weird sort of script. the dialogue is done very well and the conversations are easy to follow. I found it hilarious is some places. Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This is scene 12 of this script, so there is some development that has led to this gathering. It is humor driven, of course.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is like somebody said 'I want a script that helps define the word Snark' and you said 'coming up!' This made me smile several times with its wry humour. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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This is like somebody said 'I want a script that helps define the word Snark' and you said 'coming up!' This made me smile several times with its wry humour. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Mike. As you can see it is the twelfth scene in the script. Unfortunately, they are not linked together.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! Bill that was hilarious! So we are back on Ned's Presidential compagne again, that's good. I'm waiting for the election, he's bound to win. I've gone off coffee and tea and half the drinks mentioned in this script, thanks, Bill! Lol. Well done, this has cheered me up no end. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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LOL! Bill that was hilarious! So we are back on Ned's Presidential compagne again, that's good. I'm waiting for the election, he's bound to win. I've gone off coffee and tea and half the drinks mentioned in this script, thanks, Bill! Lol. Well done, this has cheered me up no end. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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So glad, Sandra. It's been a while since I felt like putting the boys back on the campaign trail.
