Kissed Back to the Beginning
Keeping the romance in a relationship16 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
You were right. I needed to read this one. Our first kiss is our every night kiss. Every day I awake and to my amazement this wonderful creature is still there with me. Nothing tops a love that is true.
Thanks for the heads up, and for the "hopelessly romantic" offerings.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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You were right. I needed to read this one. Our first kiss is our every night kiss. Every day I awake and to my amazement this wonderful creature is still there with me. Nothing tops a love that is true.
Thanks for the heads up, and for the "hopelessly romantic" offerings.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2022
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I wish I was so lucky. Count your blessings as I know you do. Have a great 4th of July with your forever love.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sandra,
I loved the whole thought of the imagery you described so beautifully... and being a lover of kissing, I found your words captured my intrigue, my softer and more connective side. The one who allows the imagery to take him into the scene of such bliss... for the words that came to mind, 'if she loves you, it's in her kiss" rings true in all I have ever believed.
So, nothing else to say apart from... all the very best in this contest... and being that lover of mouth-on-mouth, I loved your presentation and your beautifully composed words that metamorphosed into thought.
With our thoughts we create...
melded moments.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Hi Sandra,
I loved the whole thought of the imagery you described so beautifully... and being a lover of kissing, I found your words captured my intrigue, my softer and more connective side. The one who allows the imagery to take him into the scene of such bliss... for the words that came to mind, 'if she loves you, it's in her kiss" rings true in all I have ever believed.
So, nothing else to say apart from... all the very best in this contest... and being that lover of mouth-on-mouth, I loved your presentation and your beautifully composed words that metamorphosed into thought.
With our thoughts we create...
melded moments.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Kissing is also one of my favorite modes of communication. Thank you for your review and for appreciating my writing.
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Thank you for your writing Sandra!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from An-Oledihard
Ohooo...weee! You do know what you've done, right? This was already a sexy and tender moment without any wording, but you just took it to a whole other level. You've used the most tender of words and fit them into the minds of the lovers, perfectly. You've gone and jump-started a couple of 80 year-old lovers. So beautifully done! Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Ohooo...weee! You do know what you've done, right? This was already a sexy and tender moment without any wording, but you just took it to a whole other level. You've used the most tender of words and fit them into the minds of the lovers, perfectly. You've gone and jump-started a couple of 80 year-old lovers. So beautifully done! Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Ha, ha, here's that comment from you again. It's so much fun to have someone appreciate one's work, and if the comment is like your it's even more fun. Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love these lines - They kissed
so well
so deep
so long
that their beginning became their now. - Thank you and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Love these lines - They kissed
so well
so deep
so long
that their beginning became their now. - Thank you and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you for reading and rating this poem. The contest is over. I did not win.
Comment from Fei Ma
Really, it is a nice poem. As the competition category is "Light and sweet", this poem truly belongs in this category. Sweet, very sweet. A reader can develop the same feeling as the poem says - Time just melt away when they kissed!
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Really, it is a nice poem. As the competition category is "Light and sweet", this poem truly belongs in this category. Sweet, very sweet. A reader can develop the same feeling as the poem says - Time just melt away when they kissed!
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and giving it such a generous rating. Please consider checking out the other poems in my portfolio. Thanks!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. I found this
poem to be what romance can be like and can lead right into the present! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the words and theme of this poem.
Have a great weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. I found this
poem to be what romance can be like and can lead right into the present! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the words and theme of this poem.
Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for rating it. Wishing you a great weekend too!
Sandy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A lasting kiss can fill us with a sense of belonging as we make a connection with another and your made this kiss last with your repeated lines here, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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A lasting kiss can fill us with a sense of belonging as we make a connection with another and your made this kiss last with your repeated lines here, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and your rating!
Comment from lyenochka
Loved the way that you described the "beginning" of this romance which grew to the "now." Great use of repetition with a refrain of the start at the end which affirms that the love that started with that first kiss still exists now. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Loved the way that you described the "beginning" of this romance which grew to the "now." Great use of repetition with a refrain of the start at the end which affirms that the love that started with that first kiss still exists now. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the nice rating.
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent presentation - thoughtful and creative. Your repetition of "so well, so deep, so long" represented not only the duration but the frequency of their kissing! Well done - best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Excellent presentation - thoughtful and creative. Your repetition of "so well, so deep, so long" represented not only the duration but the frequency of their kissing! Well done - best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your rating.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
An iconic moment that is timeless. The boys returning from war in 1945. NYC parade. A kiss for generations. Made even some enlist thinking that uniform was magical.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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An iconic moment that is timeless. The boys returning from war in 1945. NYC parade. A kiss for generations. Made even some enlist thinking that uniform was magical.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Yes, as a veteran I have always loved that photo. Thanks for reading my poem and for the generous rating.
