Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a deeply moving poem about your soulmate and the love you share and your heart is poured into these words, through thick and thin you survived together, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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This is a deeply moving poem about your soulmate and the love you share and your heart is poured into these words, through thick and thin you survived together, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thanks so much for your review and comments; as you so wisely know, time creates volumes from which to dip our pen into life's ink well and write about.
Comment from karenina
OOO-LA-LA! This is ever so romantic I had to go back and read it a second time just for the thrill of it! Thanks, for teaching me a new word: "bathetic"---I was about to check before I embarrassed myself and noted you might have misspelled something! (Of course, you did not!)
In my wildest dreams, I could not wax this poetic! Kudos!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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OOO-LA-LA! This is ever so romantic I had to go back and read it a second time just for the thrill of it! Thanks, for teaching me a new word: "bathetic"---I was about to check before I embarrassed myself and noted you might have misspelled something! (Of course, you did not!)
In my wildest dreams, I could not wax this poetic! Kudos!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Time creates volumes from which to dip our pen into life's ink well and write about thank you for your reply, it brings a smile to my heart.
Comment from royowen
I think one's spouse becomes more precious was we age together, it's a really good one that remains despite the problems you both face, love is not for a day, a year, or even thirty it's for life, and reflects the eternality of God's love, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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I think one's spouse becomes more precious was we age together, it's a really good one that remains despite the problems you both face, love is not for a day, a year, or even thirty it's for life, and reflects the eternality of God's love, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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As you, dear friend surely know as well! Thank you, sir!
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Well done
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh Jim, how precious and lovely are your words about your sweet wife. I am glad you entered this contest and presented us with such a deep and meaningful verse. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job on form and delivery. Good luck.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Oh Jim, how precious and lovely are your words about your sweet wife. I am glad you entered this contest and presented us with such a deep and meaningful verse. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job on form and delivery. Good luck.
Melissa
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Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This love poem, My Precious Soulmate, combines the techniques of free verse and end rhyming to commemorate your thirty-eighth wedding anniversary. Nice.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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This love poem, My Precious Soulmate, combines the techniques of free verse and end rhyming to commemorate your thirty-eighth wedding anniversary. Nice.
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Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Thanks Bill!
