A Smile
Something to Make you Smile58 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork, Terry.
-I like your introduction and premise.
-Ironically, your father was about the
same age as mine. He was born in
1920 and passed away in 1997.
-I like your father's poem and
I can see where you get some
of your creativity from.
-I like his reference to study hall
and loved the ending.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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-Nice artwork, Terry.
-I like your introduction and premise.
-Ironically, your father was about the
same age as mine. He was born in
1920 and passed away in 1997.
-I like your father's poem and
I can see where you get some
of your creativity from.
-I like his reference to study hall
and loved the ending.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Pam, Thank you. Terry.
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You are welcome, Terry.
Comment from Julcia
Terry. You did indeed come up with words that are both smart and
insightful. I enjoy words and had a great time rereading the poem
of your late father.I did not just laugh along with his poem.
I got a chuckle out, a laugh and a smile. What fun to have comic relief
from 1954. In these troubled times. I am one of the global many who feel
your pain. Julcia
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Terry. You did indeed come up with words that are both smart and
insightful. I enjoy words and had a great time rereading the poem
of your late father.I did not just laugh along with his poem.
I got a chuckle out, a laugh and a smile. What fun to have comic relief
from 1954. In these troubled times. I am one of the global many who feel
your pain. Julcia
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. Terry.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from nomi338
This did indeed make me smile. I can remember being a young boy with incredible crushes female movie stars, singers and dancers, even some pinup or swimsuit models. As i aged those crushes transferred to younger women, but no less intense. My desire no less hopeless and impossible. I remember working in downtown Los Angeles and a scene for a TV show starring Pamela Anderson was taking place very near to where a group of employees were standing. I was close enough to actually touch MS Anderson. Of course, I did not attempt to touch her, but let me tell you, my entire month was made as a result of my being that close to one of my celebrity crushes.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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This did indeed make me smile. I can remember being a young boy with incredible crushes female movie stars, singers and dancers, even some pinup or swimsuit models. As i aged those crushes transferred to younger women, but no less intense. My desire no less hopeless and impossible. I remember working in downtown Los Angeles and a scene for a TV show starring Pamela Anderson was taking place very near to where a group of employees were standing. I was close enough to actually touch MS Anderson. Of course, I did not attempt to touch her, but let me tell you, my entire month was made as a result of my being that close to one of my celebrity crushes.
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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That is a very good close encounter story! Thanks for reading, Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you, Terry, for sharing a poem by your talented father! That did bring a smile to my face. Loved the "laughter like a waterfall ringing in my head." And the end is so cute!
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you, Terry, for sharing a poem by your talented father! That did bring a smile to my face. Loved the "laughter like a waterfall ringing in my head." And the end is so cute!
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Helen, thank you, Terry.
Comment from royowen
School shootings only really happen in the US, I feel for the kids there. one needs a good reason to own one in other western democracies, for some strange reason Americans equate gun ownership with freedom, freedom for whom? If I was a police officer I would be trigger happy too. None of this is your fault Terry. It's just this moment, well done, to your dad, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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School shootings only really happen in the US, I feel for the kids there. one needs a good reason to own one in other western democracies, for some strange reason Americans equate gun ownership with freedom, freedom for whom? If I was a police officer I would be trigger happy too. None of this is your fault Terry. It's just this moment, well done, to your dad, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Roy, thank you, Terry.
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Most welcome
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Been there. Live that moment. I was in fifth grade and the teacher had legs more than a yard long. She wore heels that accentuated their grace. It was the first female I ever noticed and was the standard thereafter. The picture looks like Haley Berry.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Been there. Live that moment. I was in fifth grade and the teacher had legs more than a yard long. She wore heels that accentuated their grace. It was the first female I ever noticed and was the standard thereafter. The picture looks like Haley Berry.
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Tom thanks...A yard long!!! It does look like Hallie Berry. Terry.
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I have been a leg man ever since.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
It is true that once again, life is very dismal this week and there seems nothing to smile about unless you live in a parallel world like some of us obviously do. This is a very cute poem. Congratulations to your father. Kate xx
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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It is true that once again, life is very dismal this week and there seems nothing to smile about unless you live in a parallel world like some of us obviously do. This is a very cute poem. Congratulations to your father. Kate xx
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Kate, thank you, Terry.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing your father's poem with us. I enjoyed it. I honestly believe if we went back to those simpler times our society wouldn't be so messed up. We've forgotten the important things in life.
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reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing your father's poem with us. I enjoyed it. I honestly believe if we went back to those simpler times our society wouldn't be so messed up. We've forgotten the important things in life.
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Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Barabara, thank you, Terry.
