Meticulous
If nothing else he was...9 total reviews
Comment from BeckyMann
So I feel odd saying 'This was great!' because it is so dark. ;) That being said, it was. Congratulations! Nicely written and well deserved. Good luck in the future.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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So I feel odd saying 'This was great!' because it is so dark. ;) That being said, it was. Congratulations! Nicely written and well deserved. Good luck in the future.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you for this amazing review, it makes my night. :)
Comment from cat frenette
Congratulations on your win!
Your poem was a lot of fun to read and then we reached the last line and BAM! Incredibly creepy Your win was well deserved.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Congratulations on your win!
Your poem was a lot of fun to read and then we reached the last line and BAM! Incredibly creepy Your win was well deserved.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks so much, I like surprise endings. I appreciate this very nice review.:)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
A great last line surprise. Nothing scary about some OCD person obsessing over how his shoes were lined up but when you leave the bodies in them...suddenly!
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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A great last line surprise. Nothing scary about some OCD person obsessing over how his shoes were lined up but when you leave the bodies in them...suddenly!
Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
I have ocd as a symptom (not my illness, I am told) and your poem captures this very uncomfortable, even scary phenomenon.
I like your poem best because I can totally identify with it.
Good luck with this one!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Author,
I have ocd as a symptom (not my illness, I am told) and your poem captures this very uncomfortable, even scary phenomenon.
I like your poem best because I can totally identify with it.
Good luck with this one!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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I have it too, a very bad case after my dad died, but milder now. I thought I was going crazy at the time I first had it. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Very clever horror story you have penned for the contest! So, is he keeping the shoes as souvenirs? Love your rhyming and build. Great job! Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Very clever horror story you have penned for the contest! So, is he keeping the shoes as souvenirs? Love your rhyming and build. Great job! Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thank you for this awesome review, it means the world to me. :)
Comment from Pantygynt
The final line here contains a terrible warning on letting OCD go untreated. No doubt the bodies, when available would be equipped with matching bloodstains.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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The final line here contains a terrible warning on letting OCD go untreated. No doubt the bodies, when available would be equipped with matching bloodstains.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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That goes without saying. OCD out of control? Or a serial killer who just happens to have OCD? who knows. Thanks for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
OH yes! The final line transforms this study of the OCD sufferer to the quite more dramatic and heinous murderer with the add-on characteristic of having OCD. Fun and, of course, horrible.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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OH yes! The final line transforms this study of the OCD sufferer to the quite more dramatic and heinous murderer with the add-on characteristic of having OCD. Fun and, of course, horrible.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thanks for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from JoannaN
Your poem is surprising. Readers expect a little story about a sportsperson obsessed with shoes, or an athlete participating in a race, and they are hit in the fate with a twist. A good job :)
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Your poem is surprising. Readers expect a little story about a sportsperson obsessed with shoes, or an athlete participating in a race, and they are hit in the fate with a twist. A good job :)
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you for this great review...it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from jessizero
I was enjoying this fun little poem . . . and then BOOM! That ending came out of nowhere. The nonchalance with which the character addresses the bodies is very cold and horrifying. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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I was enjoying this fun little poem . . . and then BOOM! That ending came out of nowhere. The nonchalance with which the character addresses the bodies is very cold and horrifying. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Hahaha...thanks for this wonderful review! :)
