In the life
A sad existence...13 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
The spider becomes a motif of a vulnerable life - wrong place, wrong time, flicked off into a puddle. You've portrayed a gritty scene here of a woman caught in 'survival's wicked game' as a sex worker. In your well constructed poem you capture her feeling of being resigned to her circumstances, feeling inevitably trapped in her situation through lack of education.
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reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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The spider becomes a motif of a vulnerable life - wrong place, wrong time, flicked off into a puddle. You've portrayed a gritty scene here of a woman caught in 'survival's wicked game' as a sex worker. In your well constructed poem you capture her feeling of being resigned to her circumstances, feeling inevitably trapped in her situation through lack of education.
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Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thanks for this insightful review and your encouraging words. Thier very appreciated. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Wow! Very powerful piece you have penned for the use these words prompt! I didn't even notice the words! I like how you repeated first line at the end!
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Wow! Very powerful piece you have penned for the use these words prompt! I didn't even notice the words! I like how you repeated first line at the end!
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thank you so much for this exceptional review, it .eans the world to me. :)
Comment from jessizero
This was definitely food for thought. Your rhymes were good, and you used the required vocabulary very well. Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes.
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reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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This was definitely food for thought. Your rhymes were good, and you used the required vocabulary very well. Thanks for sharing this here, and best wishes.
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Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
