Life a new
life a new15 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
a lot is said in six words.
I'm a great believer in second chances as people are not perfect.
I think a new should ne hyphenated.
Good luck in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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a lot is said in six words.
I'm a great believer in second chances as people are not perfect.
I think a new should ne hyphenated.
Good luck in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Katharine, I hope my second chance will knock on my door soon:)
Comment from John Ciarmello
This says it all! This is an excellent entry for the contest, and it looks to be a real contender. I wish you much success with the contest and beyond. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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This says it all! This is an excellent entry for the contest, and it looks to be a real contender. I wish you much success with the contest and beyond. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much John
Comment from Pantygynt
It is very hard to say something poetic and meaningful in just six words. you have managed it here though with this so true statement. life is full of second chances though they do reduce the older one gets.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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It is very hard to say something poetic and meaningful in just six words. you have managed it here though with this so true statement. life is full of second chances though they do reduce the older one gets.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thank you, and by writing this I am tricking myself... in believing it:)
Comment from Sally Law
Well hello, Iza dear. How are you? This is a great poem in super short verse. Beautifully penned and illustrated too. I see a strong contender for the contest. I wish you all this best with this one.
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Well hello, Iza dear. How are you? This is a great poem in super short verse. Beautifully penned and illustrated too. I see a strong contender for the contest. I wish you all this best with this one.
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the best wishes, and by writing this I am kind of forcing myself in believing it:)
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! There is always hope for "second chances" which can change life completely and redeem the past for things that didn't work out. God always gives us second chances. Great word choices.
Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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I like it! There is always hope for "second chances" which can change life completely and redeem the past for things that didn't work out. God always gives us second chances. Great word choices.
Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you and I am eagerly waiting for my second chance.
