Tucker: Double Crossed (Part-4)
The good guys made to look bad.33 total reviews
Comment from rockinm76233
well, now you've done it. You've left us wondering what in the world is going to happen to Tucker? Just as he thought nothing could get worse it did.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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well, now you've done it. You've left us wondering what in the world is going to happen to Tucker? Just as he thought nothing could get worse it did.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much, RockinM, for your extra-special six-star review and kind words. Yes, at sometime in the past, we've all thought things couldn't get worse - but most of the time, they did. LOL. I appreciate YOU!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wow! This was already good and now it's even better. I can't wait for more.
His captors didn't tarry long. The front gates of the shack were swung closed, chained, and locked behind them. Then, they vaulted into a blue Beamer, quickly merged into the old casino's outgoing traffic, and sped away. (Could Tucker see this???? If not, it can't be there.)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Wow! This was already good and now it's even better. I can't wait for more.
His captors didn't tarry long. The front gates of the shack were swung closed, chained, and locked behind them. Then, they vaulted into a blue Beamer, quickly merged into the old casino's outgoing traffic, and sped away. (Could Tucker see this???? If not, it can't be there.)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thanks you so much, Barbara, for your extra-special six-star review and kind words. Yes, Tucker could see from where he sat. I made it a point to say that he could see the Trocadero and it's landscape through the quarter-inch cracks. I just may need to go back and move it to where readers won't miss it. Everything about me and what I do needs some rearranging sometimes. LOL. I appreciate YOU!
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I noticed that, but wasn't sure it covered the Beamer. It probably did, it was just me. I constantly move sentences around. I do understand.
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I should do a lot more moving than I do. LOL. Thanks, hugs. Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from BethShelby
You certainly know how to make a story interesting. All that information about what acids do to bodies and talk of shredded flesh gives me cold chills. Farnsworth has managed to pull the wool over everyone's eyes and come out the big hero. I do wish since you don't post these episodes close together that you'd have a paragraph to remind us of what went on before. Maybe just a list of characters with enough to tell us something about them.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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You certainly know how to make a story interesting. All that information about what acids do to bodies and talk of shredded flesh gives me cold chills. Farnsworth has managed to pull the wool over everyone's eyes and come out the big hero. I do wish since you don't post these episodes close together that you'd have a paragraph to remind us of what went on before. Maybe just a list of characters with enough to tell us something about them.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much, Beth, for your extra-special six-star review and kind words. Yes, I definitely need to give you a longer paragraph to explain what's happened in the past and an outline of characters. I'll add that to my to-do list. I've just always been hesitant since so many gripe if it makes the chapter too long. If I get past 1,200 or 1,500 words, people just stop reading, for the most part. LOL. I appreciate YOU!
