Our Love
2nd place Love Poem contest60 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice commentary on summertime and the memories of a summer trip with the love of your life by your side as you explore the countryside growing deeper in your love.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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nice commentary on summertime and the memories of a summer trip with the love of your life by your side as you explore the countryside growing deeper in your love.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you Jake for you encouraging and thoughtful review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Janet.
-Thanks for sharing your notes.
-This is a beautiful poem; one of your best.
-Congratulations on your anniversary, and how
wonderful to see this area. I have never been,
but I have seen some pictures.
-There aren't words to describe the images
or even choose one, but you create a vivid word picture,
along with the meter and rhyme.
-I like all of the nature imagery in the opening verses.
-The transition to the "moors and peaks" is very good.
-You introduce the "stormy gales" but
"tranquility engulfs the night."
-A very good concluding verse.
-You deserve a win in the contest; good luck!!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Janet.
-Thanks for sharing your notes.
-This is a beautiful poem; one of your best.
-Congratulations on your anniversary, and how
wonderful to see this area. I have never been,
but I have seen some pictures.
-There aren't words to describe the images
or even choose one, but you create a vivid word picture,
along with the meter and rhyme.
-I like all of the nature imagery in the opening verses.
-The transition to the "moors and peaks" is very good.
-You introduce the "stormy gales" but
"tranquility engulfs the night."
-A very good concluding verse.
-You deserve a win in the contest; good luck!!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you Pam for your detailed review and the special sixth star. I am so pleased that you liked this one and that you think it is one of my best is icing on the cake.
It's been three years since we have been there and in my mind's eye, it is like yesterday. I hope you get to go there one day and I hope we get to go back.
Blessings and have a great weekend.
Janet
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Janet. I am glad you appreciated them and the comments. I think sometimes we do keep special memories so we can reflect on them. We don't travel anymore, but hope you get another chance. You have a great weekend, too!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. You and your husband are very lucky to have each other. It's Avery romantic poem.
Good poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. You and your husband are very lucky to have each other. It's Avery romantic poem.
Good poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Gypsy for your encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Tom Horonzy
After becoming reacquainted with your bio, I began reading and asked where in the world in Carolina are there moors and such? Then I read the author's notes and it explained it completely.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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After becoming reacquainted with your bio, I began reading and asked where in the world in Carolina are there moors and such? Then I read the author's notes and it explained it completely.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Tom for your encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's always nice when people remember the happy times and can still be living them years later. I don't read a lot of poetry, but I'm a sucker for the feel good kind. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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It's always nice when people remember the happy times and can still be living them years later. I don't read a lot of poetry, but I'm a sucker for the feel good kind. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Ric for your encouraging review. Since you don't usually read poetry, I really appreciate you reading mine and I'm pleased it didn't disappoint. (smile)
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Lilly Flowers
This is certainly a beautiful poem, which reflects the wonderful love you have experienced. The imagery, rhythm and choice of rhyming words made this a delightful read. Well done. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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This is certainly a beautiful poem, which reflects the wonderful love you have experienced. The imagery, rhythm and choice of rhyming words made this a delightful read. Well done. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you Lily for your encouraging review. I appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Anne Johnston
Happy Aniversary, sounds like you and your husband have a good relationship and enjoy traveling. Your poem is well written, good rhyming, and a joy to read.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Happy Aniversary, sounds like you and your husband have a good relationship and enjoy traveling. Your poem is well written, good rhyming, and a joy to read.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you Anne for you encouraging and thoughtful review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome, Janet
Comment from strandregs
Love the black horses
And whining wind.
You haven't been to Yorkshire have you.
Where the fields roll in yellow and green.
Where the trees as playing a scene.
Decorate every view
Just to please me and you.
:-))Z.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Love the black horses
And whining wind.
You haven't been to Yorkshire have you.
Where the fields roll in yellow and green.
Where the trees as playing a scene.
Decorate every view
Just to please me and you.
:-))Z.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you Z for your encouraging review. We were not in Yorkshire this visit but several years ago on a trip to England, I know we were in York and the Lake District which I loved as well.
Would love to go again when trip becomes less problematic.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I enjoyed reading your love poem. At night, chilly or not, you feel warm.
Through the years, the love grows. With time, wisdom comes, and you appreciate those precious moments welcoming tomorrow. Thank you.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed reading your love poem. At night, chilly or not, you feel warm.
Through the years, the love grows. With time, wisdom comes, and you appreciate those precious moments welcoming tomorrow. Thank you.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you Carolyn for you encouraging and thoughtful review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You travelled a lot accompanying your lovely wife and over a few years your love has been grown and gone manifold; you enjoyed travels, Nature and grew your love; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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You travelled a lot accompanying your lovely wife and over a few years your love has been grown and gone manifold; you enjoyed travels, Nature and grew your love; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you DR for this stellar review and your kind comments. I'm happy to say that most of my poem have some aspect of God and Nature in them giving Him all the glory.
Blessings
Janet
Blessings
Janet
