Selfishness
I felt ashamed.11 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Jen... wow, that is a great CinQuain with depths of meaning. Your verse will hit home to each of your readers. We all are tempted with selfishness. Great job and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Hello Jen... wow, that is a great CinQuain with depths of meaning. Your verse will hit home to each of your readers. We all are tempted with selfishness. Great job and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much . Jen
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, though it is sad that we can give ourselves a boost at the cost of someone else it is also very helpful to know our woes are not the worst that people have to suffer, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Excellent, though it is sad that we can give ourselves a boost at the cost of someone else it is also very helpful to know our woes are not the worst that people have to suffer, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from country ranch writer
6/8/2022 ----6:03pm
You never know what is going in with someone until you hear it or see someone is in worse shape than others. You might tell some one you are fine but inside you are hurting mentally or physically.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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6/8/2022 ----6:03pm
You never know what is going in with someone until you hear it or see someone is in worse shape than others. You might tell some one you are fine but inside you are hurting mentally or physically.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from country ranch writer
6/8/2022 ----6:03pm
You never know what is going in with someone until you hear it or see someone is in worse shape than others. You might tell some one you are fine but inside you are hurting mentally or physically.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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6/8/2022 ----6:03pm
You never know what is going in with someone until you hear it or see someone is in worse shape than others. You might tell some one you are fine but inside you are hurting mentally or physically.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Comment from Gert sherwood
I felt ashamed.
Selfishness
jenintorre with the drawing and your words about being dressed you said in few words
So sorry for myself
until I saw a young man ... with
no legs.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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I felt ashamed.
Selfishness
jenintorre with the drawing and your words about being dressed you said in few words
So sorry for myself
until I saw a young man ... with
no legs.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thanks Gert. Take care. Jen
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You are welcome Jen
Gert
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jenintorre
You are most welcome
Gert
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a thought I've had so many times, and you creatively placed it in a cinquain. Good job! There's nothing like seeing someone who could really feel self pity not showing it. I hope it does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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This is a thought I've had so many times, and you creatively placed it in a cinquain. Good job! There's nothing like seeing someone who could really feel self pity not showing it. I hope it does well in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Verna
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, clear, interesting, descriptive and
creative. I pondered on these words and as the author says so clearly
I think about someone who has so much more to deal with. Then I find I have nothing to feel sad about. Great artwork and great message!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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The author's words are heartfelt, clear, interesting, descriptive and
creative. I pondered on these words and as the author says so clearly
I think about someone who has so much more to deal with. Then I find I have nothing to feel sad about. Great artwork and great message!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thank you so mu h. Jen.
Comment from lyenochka
Ah! That does put everything into perspective when we see others who are suffering much more. Even more humbling is when those who are suffering more are taking life with such grace. Great messages in the contest! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Ah! That does put everything into perspective when we see others who are suffering much more. Even more humbling is when those who are suffering more are taking life with such grace. Great messages in the contest! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Helen.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, moving poem describes an experience that I feel sure most people have had. I've certainly been there, done that. I think God places these people and situations in our paths to wake us up and make us aware of our blessings--by making us a bit ashamed of ourselves, just for a while!
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Your well-written, moving poem describes an experience that I feel sure most people have had. I've certainly been there, done that. I think God places these people and situations in our paths to wake us up and make us aware of our blessings--by making us a bit ashamed of ourselves, just for a while!
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Janice for reading and reviewing. Much appreciated. Jen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Jen,
It's easy to let the worries of this life get us down. This is a great reminder to be thankful for all the great things that we enjoy every day. Those who have passed on are no longer able to enjoy any of them. There will always be those who have more than us and those who have less. To be grateful for what we have is satisfying and pleasing to God I believe. Thanks so much for sharing this thought provoking poem.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Hello Jen,
It's easy to let the worries of this life get us down. This is a great reminder to be thankful for all the great things that we enjoy every day. Those who have passed on are no longer able to enjoy any of them. There will always be those who have more than us and those who have less. To be grateful for what we have is satisfying and pleasing to God I believe. Thanks so much for sharing this thought provoking poem.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Tom for the great feview. Jen.
