Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Today, I Won't Get Up!"Romantic Tanka Poems
11 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
"morning glory" my mind is alive with memories though tousled with imagination I can straighten them out, thanks for the smiles, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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"morning glory" my mind is alive with memories though tousled with imagination I can straighten them out, thanks for the smiles, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Kym ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -- Atticus
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, LOL...I'm a late kinda person...
so once in a while I just love to roll up
in my cotton blanket...and stay in bed...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and love
your picture...beautiful...very well written...
love much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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HI Gypsy, LOL...I'm a late kinda person...
so once in a while I just love to roll up
in my cotton blanket...and stay in bed...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and love
your picture...beautiful...very well written...
love much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank very, Linda. I'm a night person and love sleeping in, but this poem was just for fun :) love you ♡
Gypsy
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your so welcome sweet girl...
love you... 💖🙏
Comment from aryr
I really enjoyed the two pictures of the flowers, Gypsy. I liked your words because they showed that the benefits of having a lazy day often out weigh the not. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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I really enjoyed the two pictures of the flowers, Gypsy. I liked your words because they showed that the benefits of having a lazy day often out weigh the not. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. Blessed be.
Gypsy ♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
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You are most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh, I love this one and the sheer rebellious nature that your main character exudes. The addition of the appearance of morning glories is the icing on the cake! Just love this one.
Melissa
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Oh, I love this one and the sheer rebellious nature that your main character exudes. The addition of the appearance of morning glories is the icing on the cake! Just love this one.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, Melissa, for your time and kind review. Im Happy you liked my funny poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
Cute Tanka poem- good presentation comparison- lol - sometimes everything sounds like a sour note- better to just stay in bed - stack up the pillows- get the clipboard- and write a poem about trolls! Good job! Hug
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Cute Tanka poem- good presentation comparison- lol - sometimes everything sounds like a sour note- better to just stay in bed - stack up the pillows- get the clipboard- and write a poem about trolls! Good job! Hug
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review. Im Happy you liked my funny poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Gypsy
Comment from karenina
I actually felt just like this today....
Made coffee, brought it back to bed.
Hemmed and hawed until 11AM!
On occasion my pillow is my best friend!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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I actually felt just like this today....
Made coffee, brought it back to bed.
Hemmed and hawed until 11AM!
On occasion my pillow is my best friend!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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I love sleeping in. I'm a night person. Thank you very much for your time and kind review. .
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Gypsy
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I do most of my reviewing and writing after the midnight hour...
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Wow, you are a nighttime girl too ♡
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Crazy SIS vibes! Spooky!
Comment from Ricky1024
Sometimes I feel like not getting up but most of my day start at 5:00 a.m. with Dunkin' Donuts followed by 5:30 a.m. at Retro Fitness and then possibly 7:00 at Dynasty Diner.
This was well written it with excellent artwork thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Sometimes I feel like not getting up but most of my day start at 5:00 a.m. with Dunkin' Donuts followed by 5:30 a.m. at Retro Fitness and then possibly 7:00 at Dynasty Diner.
This was well written it with excellent artwork thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Well, those morning glories are very fashionable because at the hair salons all the posters have models with "tousled hair." Ah, some mornings we just don't want to get up!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Lol! Well, those morning glories are very fashionable because at the hair salons all the posters have models with "tousled hair." Ah, some mornings we just don't want to get up!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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I'm a night person that loves to sleep in.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."-- Atticus
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written Modern Tanka you have penned. Thirty great syllables and descriptive words. Very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very well written Modern Tanka you have penned. Thirty great syllables and descriptive words. Very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and, review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --- Novalis
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, what happened who made you made? The flower showered you with their fragrance and beauty, and some of them shaded same petals for your highness:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Wow, what happened who made you made? The flower showered you with their fragrance and beauty, and some of them shaded same petals for your highness:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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It's American humor, hehehe I am not really mad at birds or sun. I just love to sleep in.
Thank you very much for your wonderful review and kind words, I really appreciate it. May you have a joyful day.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
