Comment from RodG

Excellent

This poem's message defines AGE in a charming way. I have not taken the time to consider which of my wrinkles are laugh lines. You certainly chose an appropriate piece of art to illustrate your point. Rod

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022

Thanks so much, Rod!

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

Ah, and here I was, thinking I had to lop off a leg and count the rings :-). What a great message. Life, indeed, needs to be lived, and happiness is where the living happens.

Mike

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022

Thanks so much Mike!

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I adore the photo you added to this writing. It is perfect. Laugh lines are definitely better than frown lines. I enjoyed this poem immensely. I wish yo tons of luck in the contest. This should do very well. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022

Thanks so much!!

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Your poem - accompanied by the cheerful portrait - is an encouragement for us to remember that laughter keeps us young. Accumulating wrinkles caused by laughter is a badge of honour.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022

Thank you Lisa.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This is a great poem! I am not sure if I agree or not, but it is a great thought. The Naani format fits this well. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022

Thank you.