Morning Glory
a Senryu9 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the. Write A Senryu writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the. Write A Senryu writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, Gypsy.
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Morning Glory, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, matches the lust for life on the new day with the joyful chirpings of the birds. Nice.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This senryu, Morning Glory, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, matches the lust for life on the new day with the joyful chirpings of the birds. Nice.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, Bill.
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely image and very nice words to accompany it. Yes they are unrestrainable, and just sing from the heart. Is there a lesson for mankind here? Just to live simply, with joyful hearts fulfilling our purpose?
Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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A lovely image and very nice words to accompany it. Yes they are unrestrainable, and just sing from the heart. Is there a lesson for mankind here? Just to live simply, with joyful hearts fulfilling our purpose?
Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you Wendy!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray!
Your title is perfect.
Waking up to a symphony of birds singing , is truly a glorious way to start the day.
Their bel canto puts a smile on my face and I feel my inner self recharge.
So tiny and fragile yet these feathered angels can belt out such beautiful Melodies.
I love the last line
one word that wraps up
In a sweet bow you lovely poem.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Ciao Sugarray!
Your title is perfect.
Waking up to a symphony of birds singing , is truly a glorious way to start the day.
Their bel canto puts a smile on my face and I feel my inner self recharge.
So tiny and fragile yet these feathered angels can belt out such beautiful Melodies.
I love the last line
one word that wraps up
In a sweet bow you lovely poem.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Franca!!!!
Comment from LisaMay
It seems that you and the birds have a lot in common. 'Unrestrainable' is a rather clunky word, but it gets the meaning across well. That photo is absolutely gorgeous.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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It seems that you and the birds have a lot in common. 'Unrestrainable' is a rather clunky word, but it gets the meaning across well. That photo is absolutely gorgeous.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautiful, from the words to the artwork. You have captured so much beauty in this single piece. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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This is beautiful, from the words to the artwork. You have captured so much beauty in this single piece. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
What a lovely entry in this contest, oh yes, the birds are God's heralds, making God's announcements every day, and giving their support to your exhortation on this day, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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What a lovely entry in this contest, oh yes, the birds are God's heralds, making God's announcements every day, and giving their support to your exhortation on this day, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
Pleasure
Comment from Bridge
A lovely poem. I love the bird in the artwork. It suits the poem perfectly. Very well described. I love the word you used in the last line...unrestrainedly.
All the very best to you in the contest
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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A lovely poem. I love the bird in the artwork. It suits the poem perfectly. Very well described. I love the word you used in the last line...unrestrainedly.
All the very best to you in the contest
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from jessizero
This was a great senryu. I loved each line more than the last. You really crafted a great poem here. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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This was a great senryu. I loved each line more than the last. You really crafted a great poem here. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much!
