Never again ...
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Comment from Whitewave
Wendy,
This is a scream, as a disastrous series of events makes a humorous treat for the reader. I can see it all happening - kids will be kids, and big brothers ... well, enough said. I love the way you all woke up when the adult movie was about to start, and best of all, how Father drove out with the speaker box still in the car.
(I've been in that fight for the front seat with kids in my car.)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
Wendy,
This is a scream, as a disastrous series of events makes a humorous treat for the reader. I can see it all happening - kids will be kids, and big brothers ... well, enough said. I love the way you all woke up when the adult movie was about to start, and best of all, how Father drove out with the speaker box still in the car.
(I've been in that fight for the front seat with kids in my car.)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Lol. What a fabulous review. Made me laugh out loud. I am so glad it resonated with you and enjoyed it. Thanks so much.
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me smile, this is what it is like on family outings, so many kids to please and someone is always going to be unhappy. Patience is needed when looking after children and if this is in short supply then no one is happy, a fine story Wendy, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
Ha ha ha, this made me smile, this is what it is like on family outings, so many kids to please and someone is always going to be unhappy. Patience is needed when looking after children and if this is in short supply then no one is happy, a fine story Wendy, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Dolly. Great review. Yes, kids will be kids. Poor Dad - no wonder he was frazzled, and no wonder there weren?t too many outings. Lol.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
I can remember the drive-ins so well, but I never went with my parents, dad worked weekends, and worked afternoon shift, but I can remember sometimes we sneak under a weakness in the fence, and we could sit in the area outside the canteen, a bit cold in winter, but it seems one can tolerate anything when young, beautifully written Wendy, I really enjoyed it, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
I can remember the drive-ins so well, but I never went with my parents, dad worked weekends, and worked afternoon shift, but I can remember sometimes we sneak under a weakness in the fence, and we could sit in the area outside the canteen, a bit cold in winter, but it seems one can tolerate anything when young, beautifully written Wendy, I really enjoyed it, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thanks very much Roy. I?m glad it brought back a few memories for you. lol.
Wendy
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It did Wendy,