Ship of Dreams
Unforgettable...10 total reviews
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
I am very impressed with this poem! To do the entire alphabet and have the couplets rhyme must have taken amazing thought and care! I love the story of the Titanic, in a morbid way, I guess, but just the lesson that no matter how big and wonderful things seem, there is always the possibility for things to go wrong. Good luck in the contest. I am voting for you.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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I am very impressed with this poem! To do the entire alphabet and have the couplets rhyme must have taken amazing thought and care! I love the story of the Titanic, in a morbid way, I guess, but just the lesson that no matter how big and wonderful things seem, there is always the possibility for things to go wrong. Good luck in the contest. I am voting for you.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this amazing review and your vote...both are very appreciated. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great job on this Abecdarian Poem, telling the story of the Titanic and the tragedy that it encountered. Great rhyming and very easy to read. You have chosen a good picture to illustrate.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Great job on this Abecdarian Poem, telling the story of the Titanic and the tragedy that it encountered. Great rhyming and very easy to read. You have chosen a good picture to illustrate.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this encouraging review, it's Always nice to hear from you. :)
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You are welcome
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You ran with the story very well. Imagine the pain before losing their lives in water that would make a walrus blush cold. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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You ran with the story very well. Imagine the pain before losing their lives in water that would make a walrus blush cold. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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It was a terrible tragedy, that still fascinates people. Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This abecedarian poem, Ship of Dreams, follows the twenty-six letters of the alphabet and tells a quick story of the Titanic and its doomed voyage. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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This abecedarian poem, Ship of Dreams, follows the twenty-six letters of the alphabet and tells a quick story of the Titanic and its doomed voyage. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent poem on the ill-fated Titanic. Apparently the captain was so proud of his ship he was heard to say that even God Himself could not sink it. That's throwing out a challenge! Very well written in a tough format. Congrats and good wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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An excellent poem on the ill-fated Titanic. Apparently the captain was so proud of his ship he was heard to say that even God Himself could not sink it. That's throwing out a challenge! Very well written in a tough format. Congrats and good wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a well-done poem where each sentence is a progression in the story. That isn't easy, apparently, as others I've read seemed to wander off topic to get in the letter. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This is a well-done poem where each sentence is a progression in the story. That isn't easy, apparently, as others I've read seemed to wander off topic to get in the letter. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hello dear poet, what an
outstanding Abecdarian poem about the tragic maiden
voyage of the Titanic. When
my daughter and I watched
the Titanic movie with
Leonardo Dicaprio (don't
know if I spelled that right)
and Kate Winslet we wept
so much. I just can't watch
it again. You did a great
penning on the facts and the
sadness of the loss of so
many people. My very best
wishes for the contest. ~
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Hello dear poet, what an
outstanding Abecdarian poem about the tragic maiden
voyage of the Titanic. When
my daughter and I watched
the Titanic movie with
Leonardo Dicaprio (don't
know if I spelled that right)
and Kate Winslet we wept
so much. I just can't watch
it again. You did a great
penning on the facts and the
sadness of the loss of so
many people. My very best
wishes for the contest. ~
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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The movie's end when Jack slips in the water made me cry. I'm very fascinated with the titanic and have been for years. Thank you for this amazing review. :)
Comment from royowen
You've done an excellent job with this post my friend, abecdarian are not easy posts to write, and you've done well. Yes, one of the great tragedies of the last century has been that event. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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You've done an excellent job with this post my friend, abecdarian are not easy posts to write, and you've done well. Yes, one of the great tragedies of the last century has been that event. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much. I'm been very fascinated with Titanic for years and went to the exhibit. I appreciate this great review. :)
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I think lots of folks, well done
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a cool and unique take on the prompt. I absolutely love that you have chosen to tell a historical tale. No matter how much time passes the Titanic always facinates and the story is just heartbreaking
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This is such a cool and unique take on the prompt. I absolutely love that you have chosen to tell a historical tale. No matter how much time passes the Titanic always facinates and the story is just heartbreaking
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from leather
You chose a good picture of the RMS Titanic. The poem had to be a challenge. The only line that seemed at a different level than the rest of the poem was this one: "Daring to begin a new life, they felt glad." The word 'glad' bothers me some, but on the other hand, I can't make a better suggestion that would rhyme well with the previous line. It is just one of those small things that affect rhythm.
I feel it is still an excellent poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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You chose a good picture of the RMS Titanic. The poem had to be a challenge. The only line that seemed at a different level than the rest of the poem was this one: "Daring to begin a new life, they felt glad." The word 'glad' bothers me some, but on the other hand, I can't make a better suggestion that would rhyme well with the previous line. It is just one of those small things that affect rhythm.
I feel it is still an excellent poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this great review and your helpful advice. I'll definitely look that over. :)
