One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing quite like a moonlit night to bring an ambient and tranquil peace to our senses, this is what you did here, much enjoyed, love the matching artwork too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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There is nothing quite like a moonlit night to bring an ambient and tranquil peace to our senses, this is what you did here, much enjoyed, love the matching artwork too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the stellar review, I also appreciate the kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -- Novalis
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful presentation Gypsy and a very descriptive Modern Haiku. Your words, and the chosen artwork, bring together a picture of serenity. Beautiful,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful presentation Gypsy and a very descriptive Modern Haiku. Your words, and the chosen artwork, bring together a picture of serenity. Beautiful,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the six stars and the stellar review, I also appreciate the kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." -- Novalis
Comment from leather
This is a very nice poem with an equally lovely illustration. I thank you for listing all the intricacies of modern Haiku. However, most FanStory entrants are not members of The Haiku Foundation and it seems a little unfair that some reviewers hold writers to standards that are not listed in the rules set forth by the committee. When this happens it sort of squelches a desire to enter because most people don't appreciate being dressed down for following the printed rules on FanStory. I apologize for including my mini-rant here. I still liked your poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This is a very nice poem with an equally lovely illustration. I thank you for listing all the intricacies of modern Haiku. However, most FanStory entrants are not members of The Haiku Foundation and it seems a little unfair that some reviewers hold writers to standards that are not listed in the rules set forth by the committee. When this happens it sort of squelches a desire to enter because most people don't appreciate being dressed down for following the printed rules on FanStory. I apologize for including my mini-rant here. I still liked your poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, my friend ♡ hugs
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -Atticus
Comment from karenina
That's where I want to be. Moored to serenity and awash with lunar glow...
Eyes to the sky, searching for falling stars.
Finding my solace in silence!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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That's where I want to be. Moored to serenity and awash with lunar glow...
Eyes to the sky, searching for falling stars.
Finding my solace in silence!
Karenina
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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What a beautiful review...sounds like a fresh verse poem.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review, karenina ♡ hugs
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -Atticus
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Comment from lyenochka
Ah, what a beautiful scene! And yes, I can see the "flooding" with the bright moonlight and the waves reflected the moon's rays. Loved the reflection of water and sky!
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Ah, what a beautiful scene! And yes, I can see the "flooding" with the bright moonlight and the waves reflected the moon's rays. Loved the reflection of water and sky!
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, Helen ♡ hugs & kisses
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -Atticus
