We Should All Be...
A Two Line Poem14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, We Should All Be..., uses nine words to seek prayers for God's invention in the world's current political and social problems.
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This two-line poem, We Should All Be..., uses nine words to seek prayers for God's invention in the world's current political and social problems.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only the future generation could unite the earth and bring peace, it is our hope and you managed to bring a positive message to your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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If only the future generation could unite the earth and bring peace, it is our hope and you managed to bring a positive message to your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well presented. You followed the
rules, too. The image is perfect. Your message is loud
and clear. How wonderful the world would be if all
agreed with your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Your contest entry is well presented. You followed the
rules, too. The image is perfect. Your message is loud
and clear. How wonderful the world would be if all
agreed with your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Jan, yes it would be wonderful if we could, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have written a good essence poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The message is a good one about all
people and nations joining together for the greater good of all.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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-Good artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-Notes are appreciated.
-You have written a good essence poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The message is a good one about all
people and nations joining together for the greater good of all.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from Dreamdancer
Wow... a very powerful piece my friend, the imagery along with the picture make for a very impactful write. I enjoyed this! I wish I could write so well. Best of luck my friend
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Wow... a very powerful piece my friend, the imagery along with the picture make for a very impactful write. I enjoyed this! I wish I could write so well. Best of luck my friend
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, you write so very well, the emotions you can bring out in the reader are a credit, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
If only people would stop and think about how we are all part of the human family - and we share the same planet. Therefore, why are we killing each other and destroying our home with war and hate? It is foolish - as the animals and plants are not the only things in danger of going extinct...
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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If only people would stop and think about how we are all part of the human family - and we share the same planet. Therefore, why are we killing each other and destroying our home with war and hate? It is foolish - as the animals and plants are not the only things in danger of going extinct...
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Yes we should stop and think, Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Two Line Poem contest.
Good lines count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the Two Line Poem contest.
Good lines count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from John Ciarmello
Congratulations on your 500 Milestone post! This is beautiful, from the words to the art. I loved it all, my friend. I wish you much success with the contest, Kahpot. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Congratulations on your 500 Milestone post! This is beautiful, from the words to the art. I loved it all, my friend. I wish you much success with the contest, Kahpot. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you, my friend, for these encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on your 500th post, Kahpot!
It's clever to use the title as part of the poem so you have extra impact with your rhyming two lines with the well placed internal rhymes. Yes, we should all be dreaming of God uniting all of us.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Congratulations on your 500th post, Kahpot!
It's clever to use the title as part of the poem so you have extra impact with your rhyming two lines with the well placed internal rhymes. Yes, we should all be dreaming of God uniting all of us.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, I remember a few years back when I attempted a really short poem someone (lyenochka) advised me to connect the title to the words for as you said greater impact, (I do listen/read) and in my note pad on the laptop transfer all information that is so very helpful, such a joy to learn on this site, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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💖😊🌼🌻🌷I should follow my own advice! Thanks for sharing that, Kahpot!
Comment from tfawcus
A poem that gives one pause for reflection. How much more preferable is a world defined by geophysical features than one defined by political boundaries.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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A poem that gives one pause for reflection. How much more preferable is a world defined by geophysical features than one defined by political boundaries.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
