The Ultimate Question
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Comment from joann r romei
This was well done, I like the child mentioning jail, perhaps he saw a tv show about something to put the mature idea in his mind. lol No errors in the short piece.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This was well done, I like the child mentioning jail, perhaps he saw a tv show about something to put the mature idea in his mind. lol No errors in the short piece.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you Joanne. I appreciate your review.
Comment from royowen
I must say I agree, that was how I learnt about God's love for me, I loved my kids, there was an example of if my children were bad, would I throw them out of my, God forbid, I wanted them in my life... always. Then I knew that even if I sinned, He would still unconditionally love, it's funny how your childhood comes back to you, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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I must say I agree, that was how I learnt about God's love for me, I loved my kids, there was an example of if my children were bad, would I throw them out of my, God forbid, I wanted them in my life... always. Then I knew that even if I sinned, He would still unconditionally love, it's funny how your childhood comes back to you, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you Roy. I appreciate your thoughts.
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Most welcome
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a powerful message, pervading every line and phrase. I like how you looked at multi-generational viewpoints, and transitioned from family to the wider school environment, but showed how the same concept could apply. Very well written - I enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This is a powerful message, pervading every line and phrase. I like how you looked at multi-generational viewpoints, and transitioned from family to the wider school environment, but showed how the same concept could apply. Very well written - I enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Mike. I am so pleased it resonated with you.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Here we go again! I am about to rant. (LOL) I NEED MORE SIXES TO BE ABLE TO RATE OUTSTANDING WORK AS IT DESERVES.
I've mentioned this many times since becoming a member of FanStory. Sixes should be doled out according to the amount of reviewing one does. I'm sorry I have none left this week. This had me in tears. I LOVED it!!!!!!!!! Not only did it have me in tears when you related the bit about your son, the whole story is flawless and delivers a wonderfully inspiring message.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Here we go again! I am about to rant. (LOL) I NEED MORE SIXES TO BE ABLE TO RATE OUTSTANDING WORK AS IT DESERVES.
I've mentioned this many times since becoming a member of FanStory. Sixes should be doled out according to the amount of reviewing one does. I'm sorry I have none left this week. This had me in tears. I LOVED it!!!!!!!!! Not only did it have me in tears when you related the bit about your son, the whole story is flawless and delivers a wonderfully inspiring message.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Dawn, thank you so much. Your review made me smile!! I appreciate it so much. And I agree about the stars. I was out of stars by Tuesday night this week yet I am always very careful and cautious about using them. Now, speaking of rants ? there is a rant contest coming up! Lol. Go for it! You would get lots of reviews and votes.
Comment from Annmuma
This is a beautifully written story about a most important fact of every life. I enjoyed the read and know that your children and your students enjoyed an excellent teacher. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This is a beautifully written story about a most important fact of every life. I enjoyed the read and know that your children and your students enjoyed an excellent teacher. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you Ann - for your lovely words and good wishes. I?m glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi((((((((,
I have to admit, I had tears in my eyes and felt quite emotional on reaching the end of this beautiful little bundle of written memories.
I loved the substance and values portrayed within the message of the story. I just wished I had had a teacher such as you growing up and maybe, just maybe, I would have had a much better transition into my mid teens... not gone into the big world dyslexic and believing I was below par... because, yes. 'That's what gives us value, and a precious sense of self-worth'. Teachers such as you!
I can't say I tried to do a word count... but considering you are, or were a teacher... I'm trusting, okay?:)
All the very best in this contest... I loved the construction and presentation of this story. Well done, it touch a special place in me that had me applauding you, your stance, your morals and patience!
With our thoughts we create...
conscious choices.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Hi((((((((,
I have to admit, I had tears in my eyes and felt quite emotional on reaching the end of this beautiful little bundle of written memories.
I loved the substance and values portrayed within the message of the story. I just wished I had had a teacher such as you growing up and maybe, just maybe, I would have had a much better transition into my mid teens... not gone into the big world dyslexic and believing I was below par... because, yes. 'That's what gives us value, and a precious sense of self-worth'. Teachers such as you!
I can't say I tried to do a word count... but considering you are, or were a teacher... I'm trusting, okay?:)
All the very best in this contest... I loved the construction and presentation of this story. Well done, it touch a special place in me that had me applauding you, your stance, your morals and patience!
With our thoughts we create...
conscious choices.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Wow, such a beautiful and meaningful review. I enjoyed teaching the ones who had issues of any kind and turning their attitudes around from a sense of failure and low self-esteem to self- belief and interest and joy in achieving and learning. Those kids were always very special. They didn?t believe me at first when I told them that I thought future employers would be more pleased with seeing an A for effort than an A for achievement. I explained that A for effort meant they would still keep trying and persevering even when they found it tough going. That was a mark of a fine strong character. Sometimes people could get an A for achievement without much effort at all. Sorry. Long reply. I thank you most sincerely for your meaningful and thoughtful review, and I value the honour of six stars.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I like your story and the message you are sending to us readers. You remind me of my mother and father. They loved all twelve of us unconditionally. I'm sure we disappointed them at times, but they still loved us. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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I like your story and the message you are sending to us readers. You remind me of my mother and father. They loved all twelve of us unconditionally. I'm sure we disappointed them at times, but they still loved us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. How wonderful that each of you knew that unconditional love!
Comment from LisaMay
Lovely story, well told, engaging and human. Good work, W... likely to be another winner for you I hope.
Your story resonated with me on a personal level with your response to what your mother said: ''How good does a child have to be to merit love? So love could be offered and then removed? Love was fragile?''
When I knew I was adopted it put (self-imposed)pressure on me about being good all the time, so I wasn't taken back where they got me from - the zoo or the dog pound like some big kids had told me. If I had a mother before I came into this family, had I been bad? Had my behaviour made her give me away? Why had she withdrawn her love? How was love so fragile when I didn't know how good I had to be to keep a mother loving me?
It's easy to see now as adults how confusing comments can be, and how much little kids can be wounded by adults comments they don't give enough thought to.
Suggested corrections:
He squeezed my hand.(add space)We paused. I continued.
"Jim, you know I gave you "the look". That was my warning.
(Quote marks within double quote marks should be singles not doubles, as in 'the look'.)
I think some of your paragraphs are too short at just one sentence and could be run together, these 2 sentences especially:
This ultimate question - and its answer - reminds me of how much reassurance we all need that we are loved.
For ourselves. No matter how old we are. Love must be unconditional. No "ifs". No "whens". Just loved.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Lovely story, well told, engaging and human. Good work, W... likely to be another winner for you I hope.
Your story resonated with me on a personal level with your response to what your mother said: ''How good does a child have to be to merit love? So love could be offered and then removed? Love was fragile?''
When I knew I was adopted it put (self-imposed)pressure on me about being good all the time, so I wasn't taken back where they got me from - the zoo or the dog pound like some big kids had told me. If I had a mother before I came into this family, had I been bad? Had my behaviour made her give me away? Why had she withdrawn her love? How was love so fragile when I didn't know how good I had to be to keep a mother loving me?
It's easy to see now as adults how confusing comments can be, and how much little kids can be wounded by adults comments they don't give enough thought to.
Suggested corrections:
He squeezed my hand.(add space)We paused. I continued.
"Jim, you know I gave you "the look". That was my warning.
(Quote marks within double quote marks should be singles not doubles, as in 'the look'.)
I think some of your paragraphs are too short at just one sentence and could be run together, these 2 sentences especially:
This ultimate question - and its answer - reminds me of how much reassurance we all need that we are loved.
For ourselves. No matter how old we are. Love must be unconditional. No "ifs". No "whens". Just loved.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful review, and suggestions. I will revise and edit.
Always value your thoughts and input.
Comment from jessizero
This was very sweet. I'm sure that, deep down (or maybe not so deep), we all long for unconditional love. Thank you for sharing this story here. Best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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This was very sweet. I'm sure that, deep down (or maybe not so deep), we all long for unconditional love. Thank you for sharing this story here. Best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. Greatly appreciated.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A beautifully written story. I love how you transitioned between your private role as a mom and your public role as a teacher. I love you made your font large, so your story was easy to read. I like the different colored font indicating a new speaker. The visual also fits well with the story. This was an enjoyable, feel-good read. You sound like an awesome mom and teacher. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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A beautifully written story. I love how you transitioned between your private role as a mom and your public role as a teacher. I love you made your font large, so your story was easy to read. I like the different colored font indicating a new speaker. The visual also fits well with the story. This was an enjoyable, feel-good read. You sound like an awesome mom and teacher. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much. Your review is very encouraging and very positive. I appreciate your words a great deal.
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You are welcome.
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Thank you so much. Your review is very encouraging and very positive. I appreciate your words a great deal.
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Well-deserved!
