Live and Don't Let Die
A 2-8-2 Poem7 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup you define so well our "puurfekt times" they deserve a reset- gun laws
political stupidity
Bang! Bang!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Yup you define so well our "puurfekt times" they deserve a reset- gun laws
political stupidity
Bang! Bang!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."--Atticus
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid."--Atticus
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You vividly voice here about making gun laws in your country; you see, it is practically political stupidity; for gun does not kill, man misuse guns and kills man; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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You vividly voice here about making gun laws in your country; you see, it is practically political stupidity; for gun does not kill, man misuse guns and kills man; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from jaded831
Reading your poem the first time, I couldn't tell where you stood on the subject. Just like many politicians. I read your notes and agree. Carrying a gun may be a Constitutional Right, but assault weapons are another story.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Reading your poem the first time, I couldn't tell where you stood on the subject. Just like many politicians. I read your notes and agree. Carrying a gun may be a Constitutional Right, but assault weapons are another story.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Wow! Thank you so very much, I am glad the notes helped
Comment from Fleedleflump
Yes, that phrase all made me laugh. Of course someone who wants to kill can always find a way to do it. But if you give them easy access to military grade assault weaponry, you're turning ing what might have been a fight in the playground into a mass murder event.
I liked your effective poem.
Mike
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Yes, that phrase all made me laugh. Of course someone who wants to kill can always find a way to do it. But if you give them easy access to military grade assault weaponry, you're turning ing what might have been a fight in the playground into a mass murder event.
I liked your effective poem.
Mike
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-8-2, Live and Don't Let Die, has the proper formatting and addresses gun control in the United States. Nuts will shoot people; keep guns from them.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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This 2-8-2, Live and Don't Let Die, has the proper formatting and addresses gun control in the United States. Nuts will shoot people; keep guns from them.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is nicely written. I don't see any way they can control guns. Almost everybody I know has at least one gun in their home. I have two myself. If some goon wants a gun, he will get it one way or another. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This is nicely written. I don't see any way they can control guns. Almost everybody I know has at least one gun in their home. I have two myself. If some goon wants a gun, he will get it one way or another. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you, yes it would/will be a real fight
