Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I feel a shotgun wedding on the (not so distant) horizon! This made me chuckle - a tale as old as humans, being caught out unexpectedly. Nicely written, and I very much enjoyed.

Mike

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022

Thanks, Mike

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Laughing my butt off! Sad but true, been there, done that and I am now glad it won't ever happen again.... Thanks for sharing a laugh! Dreamdancer

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022

Thank you, DD.

Comment from leather

Excellent

I got a laugh before I even read the poem. That bug-eyed picture was hilarious--great choice. The poem is so funny too. Without spelling it out, everyone who reads this knows what is being talked about.

This is six-star work, but I only have the fives left. Sorry.

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022

Thank you, Leather