A Comet Cometh
a poem15 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
love that first stanza! sounds like me!
this was a very good poem with no rules - liked the flow and look
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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love that first stanza! sounds like me!
this was a very good poem with no rules - liked the flow and look
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Shelley. I probably stole your free style.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
A comet cometh, then a comet goeth. What it may or may
not leave behind depend on many variables. In the meantime
one should live for the day and not wonder what/when if. . . .
I like the color scheme and the formatting.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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A comet cometh, then a comet goeth. What it may or may
not leave behind depend on many variables. In the meantime
one should live for the day and not wonder what/when if. . . .
I like the color scheme and the formatting.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from nomi338
Yes, and if it hits, none of the remaining bits will be able to unite in any meaningful way. If it lands and does not completely destroy, perhaps some random girl and boy, may unite and procreate us back into the game, to continue the fight.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Yes, and if it hits, none of the remaining bits will be able to unite in any meaningful way. If it lands and does not completely destroy, perhaps some random girl and boy, may unite and procreate us back into the game, to continue the fight.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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If a comet hits, I may have to move elsewhere.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like the idea that we wait for a step-change to bring us things instead of actively seeking them. Perhaps a boot cometh to get me to finish the next novel. Hmm...
I very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I like the idea that we wait for a step-change to bring us things instead of actively seeking them. Perhaps a boot cometh to get me to finish the next novel. Hmm...
I very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Like all things that change, they occur slowly, methodically, or BAM!
Comment from Sally Law
Yes, a comet approaches. In this wacky world, if it hit us square on, it would solve a lot of problems. The whining would certainly stop.
Sending you my best today as always for the unique poem. Very striking, Bill. Oops, maybe a better word than striking....
My best for the contest too,
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Yes, a comet approaches. In this wacky world, if it hit us square on, it would solve a lot of problems. The whining would certainly stop.
Sending you my best today as always for the unique poem. Very striking, Bill. Oops, maybe a better word than striking....
My best for the contest too,
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Sal. Close only counts in horseshoes and comet strikes.
