Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "God's Grace"Musings of an old man - 2022
31 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a perfect example of a rhyming acrostic poem. You did a great job with the prompt, very creative.
This is a strong submission and I wish you luck in the contest,
The rhymes are effortless and flow lyrically. They create a tempo that eases down the page.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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This is a perfect example of a rhyming acrostic poem. You did a great job with the prompt, very creative.
This is a strong submission and I wish you luck in the contest,
The rhymes are effortless and flow lyrically. They create a tempo that eases down the page.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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K.L thanks for sharing your comments and for your strong validation.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent faith based poem with the acrostic form. Your smooth lines remind the reader of the beauty of faith from the sins of the world. I like the line "Redemption is sealed by the spirit, the Christ!". It is positive and brings forth a wonderful message.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Excellent faith based poem with the acrostic form. Your smooth lines remind the reader of the beauty of faith from the sins of the world. I like the line "Redemption is sealed by the spirit, the Christ!". It is positive and brings forth a wonderful message.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Mermaids, thank you so very much!
Comment from royowen
What a good post, telling people about the death and resurrection of Christ, and grace received through faith that comes from believing on that very miracle, is what it's all about. A beautifully written rhyming acrostic, neat and very tidy, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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What a good post, telling people about the death and resurrection of Christ, and grace received through faith that comes from believing on that very miracle, is what it's all about. A beautifully written rhyming acrostic, neat and very tidy, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Roy, thank you for your review and validation.
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Most welcome
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are filled God's Grace, meaningful, joyous, thankful
and creative. I found these words beautiful and pondered on the last
two lines of what the Lord has done for us. The rhyming is this poem
is great. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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The author's words are filled God's Grace, meaningful, joyous, thankful
and creative. I found these words beautiful and pondered on the last
two lines of what the Lord has done for us. The rhyming is this poem
is great. The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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harmony, thank you so much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem. The rhyme scheme mostly works. It would be good to not have two lines ending with "master" in the first verse. The font used is large and easily read. The visual fits the poem well. It meets the somewhat difficult requirements. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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This is a good poem. The rhyme scheme mostly works. It would be good to not have two lines ending with "master" in the first verse. The font used is large and easily read. The visual fits the poem well. It meets the somewhat difficult requirements. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Sandra, thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from leather
I read the poem and then thought immediately of all the people in
Ukraine who are calling upon the Lord with great dispatch and are waiting as their lives and country suffer. I guess not all prayers are answered at the same time or in the same way. Still, a well-constructed poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I read the poem and then thought immediately of all the people in
Ukraine who are calling upon the Lord with great dispatch and are waiting as their lives and country suffer. I guess not all prayers are answered at the same time or in the same way. Still, a well-constructed poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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leather, I know I forget at times, that we in our bumbling free will lives that there is God's time and earth time. God has a plan and whilst it is so painful and raw in the present moment, I believe with unbounded faith that God hears and answers every prayer in His time frame. Thanks for this review and good wishes.
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You are to be commended for your faith.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A great entry for the acrostic poem. Rhyming is good and it describes well the grace of God. Grace, forgiveness far beyond what we deserve. Jesus paid the supreme price and offers salvation freely to us.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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A great entry for the acrostic poem. Rhyming is good and it describes well the grace of God. Grace, forgiveness far beyond what we deserve. Jesus paid the supreme price and offers salvation freely to us.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Anne thank you! I believe with unbounded faith that God hears and answers every prayer in His time frame. Thanks for this review and good wishes.
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You are very welcome
Comment from Regina Elliott
This is such a grand Christian
rhyming acrostic, dear poet.
I hope you place with it in
the contest. My very best
wishes for the competition.
Many blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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This is such a grand Christian
rhyming acrostic, dear poet.
I hope you place with it in
the contest. My very best
wishes for the competition.
Many blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Janet Foor
God's Grace truly is sufficient and your well written rhyming acrostic poem makes that very clear.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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God's Grace truly is sufficient and your well written rhyming acrostic poem makes that very clear.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Janet, thank you! believe with unbounded faith that God hears and answers every prayer in His time frame. Thanks for this review and good wishes. May your weekend be filled with abundant Joys! 🙏🙏
Comment from C T Curtis
I enjoyed your acrostic poem very much. I got a little bit lost with the phrase "Drawn from His precious love to square" and not sure if you meant His love is to 'square up the sins' or what was intended. In any event, that's just on me and my interpretation, and it is a meaningful poem. Good job!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed your acrostic poem very much. I got a little bit lost with the phrase "Drawn from His precious love to square" and not sure if you meant His love is to 'square up the sins' or what was intended. In any event, that's just on me and my interpretation, and it is a meaningful poem. Good job!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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CT thank you for letting me know that this stanza caused you to stumble. Perhaps my change is better ...?
