Winter Gems
Ice crystals become gemstones. (5-7-5)4 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Nice job rhyming your brief 5-7-5 poem with a spectacular illustration of those "winter gems" that sparkle and blaze in the winter. I liked the "low rays" to indicate the slant of sunlight in winter. Congratulations on the win!!
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Nice job rhyming your brief 5-7-5 poem with a spectacular illustration of those "winter gems" that sparkle and blaze in the winter. I liked the "low rays" to indicate the slant of sunlight in winter. Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful! This is a stunning image and your words are perfect for those icy cold days. Very well written and it should do very well in the contest. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Beautiful! This is a stunning image and your words are perfect for those icy cold days. Very well written and it should do very well in the contest. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
Comment from viking
Sounds so cozy and pleasant, I too love my warm bed in winter. It is really nice to hibernate like a bear in winter and you sleep so much better when the weather is cold.
I love your poem, it is inspiring sending positive vibes, enjoy life as much as you can.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Sounds so cozy and pleasant, I too love my warm bed in winter. It is really nice to hibernate like a bear in winter and you sleep so much better when the weather is cold.
I love your poem, it is inspiring sending positive vibes, enjoy life as much as you can.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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It's just been disqualified for not being an ode to winter!!! I have to change it.
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Oh no, a similar kind of thing happened to me yesterday. Luckily I checked my messages in time to add 2 more lines to my poem.
It needed to have 20-24 lines and I had only 18 even I had counted 20, but it was wrong.
Best of luck to you 🤞🤞you can do it!
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Thanks for your encouragement!
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You?re very welcome
Comment from leather
This is a very nice entry, with a good illustration, the 5-7-5 format, and a nice topic. It should be a solid submission. It is kind of nice to read poems about winter after a day that was 102 degrees!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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This is a very nice entry, with a good illustration, the 5-7-5 format, and a nice topic. It should be a solid submission. It is kind of nice to read poems about winter after a day that was 102 degrees!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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It's just been disqualified for not being an ode to winter!!! I have to change it.
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It hurts when that happens. If they allow you to change it, then do it. At any rate, keep writing. Best wishes.
