C. C. Cane and Moot
a one-scene script10 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Ha, very funny, Bill. Well, I guess you've got only six months to live, then why go out being the stick you were made to be. Giving life below while death chews down on you from above. Nature is wonderful.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Ha, very funny, Bill. Well, I guess you've got only six months to live, then why go out being the stick you were made to be. Giving life below while death chews down on you from above. Nature is wonderful.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Always try new things!!
Comment from kahpot
Well, I guess this fight between PM and WS could be called someone's last stand, love the banter between your characters, full of humor, and very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Well, I guess this fight between PM and WS could be called someone's last stand, love the banter between your characters, full of humor, and very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Ric Myworld
I have never read many scripts until recently, thinking that without all the descriptive explanations, and being mostly dialog, I would stick with prose fiction. But your endless imagination overcomes the limitations. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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I have never read many scripts until recently, thinking that without all the descriptive explanations, and being mostly dialog, I would stick with prose fiction. But your endless imagination overcomes the limitations. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Ric
Comment from Wendy G
A clever idea, and very wittily written with plenty of humour in the word-plays. The walking stick probably does get his head bitten off at the end! Best wishes for the first date contest. You can be sure there will be no other similar entries! Lol.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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A clever idea, and very wittily written with plenty of humour in the word-plays. The walking stick probably does get his head bitten off at the end! Best wishes for the first date contest. You can be sure there will be no other similar entries! Lol.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Wendy. It would be funny if there were though.
Comment from nomi338
Man, you know how to really stick it to your readers. This is quite a story. After I finished laughing my head off at the illustration of a walking stick. I was greatly amused and aroused by the clever story of the Praying Mantis and the Walking Stick. What a story.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Man, you know how to really stick it to your readers. This is quite a story. After I finished laughing my head off at the illustration of a walking stick. I was greatly amused and aroused by the clever story of the Praying Mantis and the Walking Stick. What a story.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Some think the story. Is unreali-stick.
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Yeah, well what do they know?
Comment from lyenochka
Cute dialogue but I would think that the preying mantis and the walking stick would not canoodle as they are different species and the walking stick can reproduce parthenogenically. But who knows? Both Moot and WS could start something new. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Cute dialogue but I would think that the preying mantis and the walking stick would not canoodle as they are different species and the walking stick can reproduce parthenogenically. But who knows? Both Moot and WS could start something new. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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They likely do not mate due to the *stick-ma*.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
So it would seem he lost his head over her after all. A plot for an animated short. I like the punny dialogue.
Thanks for an interesting read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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So it would seem he lost his head over her after all. A plot for an animated short. I like the punny dialogue.
Thanks for an interesting read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thanks, D
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You are welcome.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Funny. I love adroit word play an this has it. The set up is perfect and the ending comment is, too. There's nothing like viewing life from the perspective of a different species.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Funny. I love adroit word play an this has it. The set up is perfect and the ending comment is, too. There's nothing like viewing life from the perspective of a different species.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Nancy. This was a fun one.
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:-)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an amusing account of a dangerous date. It just goes to show, you can never really change the fundamental character of a person, or even an insect. Kate xx
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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This is an amusing account of a dangerous date. It just goes to show, you can never really change the fundamental character of a person, or even an insect. Kate xx
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Some dates may be with destiny.
Comment from BethShelby
I don't think this first date is going to work out. I'd say the walking stick might better watch his language because this lady mantis regardless of her conversion has gotta eat and she's not fond of vegetables. Of course the fact he hasn't got a lot meat on his bones, might work to his advantage.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I don't think this first date is going to work out. I'd say the walking stick might better watch his language because this lady mantis regardless of her conversion has gotta eat and she's not fond of vegetables. Of course the fact he hasn't got a lot meat on his bones, might work to his advantage.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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He should have kept on walking.
