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Happy Father's Day God

To my Awesome Heavenly Father

30 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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You've written this in heptametric stanzas with that typical even beat that makes and Joins both the ballad style and this one, and wrote about the most important subject of all, the Father of lights, who shines His impeccable light on us, beautifully written my friend, an excellent post Debi, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Roy, I am so appreciative of your review. I'm not even sure I can explain how much it means, because of how I feel about your God given talent and wisdom. I humbly thank you, as I wasn't sure this would be well received, yet sometimes I know it has to be right when God won't let me pass it by.
    You're prayers have been life changing for me and I feel mine are being heard again. Thank you so much for that. I am so touched by your kind comments, review and gracious six stars. You are such a special friend!
    And I don't know if you celebrate it, but I wish you a very Happy Father's Day!
reply by royowen on 19-Jun-2022
    Ours is in September Dear Debi, thanks you for your gracious reply, well earned six here
Comment from BethShelby
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This is an excellent poem. You've thought of something most of haven't considered. When we are thinking of fathers we should all remember that God is the father of all of us, and we should daily take time to thank Him. I love everything you said in this beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Beth thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from Ulla
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I don't know what to say. I have never thought about it quite this way. Now, I have to admit I'm not religious either so it wouldn't really occur to me either. But when you have the faith I am can see it's a lovely. All in best, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Ulla, I think we have had a similar conversation about this before and as always, I love your honesty and respect for my feelings as much as I feel the same towards yours. You are so gracious and sweet and I truly appreciate your very kind review and comments. Thanks again my friend.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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What a great idea, Debi. So often we forget all that our Heavenly Father has blessed us with. Your poem is very well written, great rhyming and easy to read. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Anne, l humbly thank you for your lovely review and comments. Also for the very generous six stars. I have been wanting for sometime now to write this, but the time seemed right as I miss my dad. It thankful for those years with him, and thankful my Heavenly one is aways there to hear me.Thank you once again my dear friend!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Anne, l humbly thank you for your lovely review and comments. Also for the very generous six stars. I have been wanting for sometime now to write this, but the time seemed right as I miss my dad. It thankful for those years with him, and thankful my Heavenly one is aways there to hear me.Thank you once again my dear friend!
reply by Anne Johnston on 20-Jun-2022
    You are very welcome
Comment from JoannaN
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Hello, thank you very much for sharing this poem. This poem tells the story from the different angle, with the merciful God as our father. I like your perspective - being thankful and grateful is an important aspect of our lives, as it helps us to come forward :) Best regards, J.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Joanna, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from amahra
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Wow, I love your first line. And I'm ashamed that I never even thought of saying Happy Father's Day to my Lord. After all, He did give His Son for our redemption. Thanks for reminding us.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Amahra, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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A well-written thoughtful and faithful poem. Yours is the first poem I have read thanking God for him being the omniscient Father for all. I like that it is written in large font so easy to read, and the visual fits perfectly. Well-done!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Sandra, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 19-Jun-2022
    You are welcome.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Btw Sandra, I love your picture. Beautiful!
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 19-Jun-2022
    Thank you Ms. Debi!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is amazing and you are so right. God does deserve to be honored every day, but especially on Father's Day. He is the one who created us. Thank you for sharing this with us. I have a feeling many people, including me will be adding Him to our Father's Day.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Barb, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from Paul McFarland
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A nice different slant on Father's Day. Certainly our Heavenly Father deserves a poem, and you have given Him a good one. I'm sure He appreciates it.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Paul, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are inspiring, loving, with admiration, descriptive and creative. I found these words filled with creativity and yes as the author states , Our Heavenly Father. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
    Maria/Harmony, I love both of your names together, as they are both so pretty. I thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!