Summer Heat
Thinking of summers past3 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Jasmine has that affect on everyone. Works for me, just close my eyes and I can feel the breeze and take in the fragrant Jasmine. Best of luck with this poem in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Jasmine has that affect on everyone. Works for me, just close my eyes and I can feel the breeze and take in the fragrant Jasmine. Best of luck with this poem in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your review!
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:)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem. The syllable count is on point and the poem has a concrete message. The visual fits perfectly. However, the font needs to be larger because it is overpowered by the large visual. Consider also centering the text. That will also make it more prominent. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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This is a good poem. The syllable count is on point and the poem has a concrete message. The visual fits perfectly. However, the font needs to be larger because it is overpowered by the large visual. Consider also centering the text. That will also make it more prominent. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Those windows can be a great reprieve when the heat is battering us down, can't they? There's nothing like a cool breeze across a sweat-coated forehead :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Those windows can be a great reprieve when the heat is battering us down, can't they? There's nothing like a cool breeze across a sweat-coated forehead :-)
Mike
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Agree! Thanks for the review.
