Butterflies
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We had a family of white butterflies all travelling together in the park one year and it was a sight to behold, like little angels blessing the earth, you brought those winged wonders to life here Bill, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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We had a family of white butterflies all travelling together in the park one year and it was a sight to behold, like little angels blessing the earth, you brought those winged wonders to life here Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from judiverse
This is great. Lovely presentation. Excellent use of alliteration with winged wonders welcome. I like the imagery of butterfly congregations. The third line reminds me of the slogan of the leading health care association where I live--Healthier Together. Wishing you the best of success in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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This is great. Lovely presentation. Excellent use of alliteration with winged wonders welcome. I like the imagery of butterfly congregations. The third line reminds me of the slogan of the leading health care association where I live--Healthier Together. Wishing you the best of success in the contest. judi
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Judi
Comment from nomi338
Bill, I have just one question: Have you twisted many tongues today? I do not know if you set out to twist tongues when you posted this little ditty, but twist tongues you did do, mine at least was so twisted that I may never speak correctly again. Thanks a lot.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Bill, I have just one question: Have you twisted many tongues today? I do not know if you set out to twist tongues when you posted this little ditty, but twist tongues you did do, mine at least was so twisted that I may never speak correctly again. Thanks a lot.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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One suggestion is to read without mouthing the words. Then the twisting is internal.
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Internally is where I hurt the most. No thanks. Besides I like the sound of my voice when I speak aloud.
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and illustrated poetry, Bill. The short verse conveys a larger message of community. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Beautifully penned and illustrated poetry, Bill. The short verse conveys a larger message of community. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Sal, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Fleedleflump
This looks like one of those images where you stare for a while and suddenly there's another picture within it :-). In this case, I just gave myself eyeball ache instead! I love you central line - immensely descriptive and implicative, and your general use of assonance and alliteration gives this a strongly poetic vibe. Great stuff :-)
Mike
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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This looks like one of those images where you stare for a while and suddenly there's another picture within it :-). In this case, I just gave myself eyeball ache instead! I love you central line - immensely descriptive and implicative, and your general use of assonance and alliteration gives this a strongly poetic vibe. Great stuff :-)
Mike
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Mike, for the encouraging review. Bill
