Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Another Appalachian Day"Musings of an old man - 2022
34 total reviews
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Well done mystery poet.
You have captured every essence of your topic including sights, sounds smells and tasted.
Love your Appalachian word usage which really brings the reader into your world whether they understand the words or not.
I was thinking about entering this contest. Not so sure now! LOL
I smell a winner here
Good luck
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Well done mystery poet.
You have captured every essence of your topic including sights, sounds smells and tasted.
Love your Appalachian word usage which really brings the reader into your world whether they understand the words or not.
I was thinking about entering this contest. Not so sure now! LOL
I smell a winner here
Good luck
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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KatieMae, I am so very grateful, I do look forward to reading yours which will be equally unique. 🙏🎶
Comment from evilynne
A wonderful poem describing in detail the natural beauty of the Appalachian Mountains. It is very well written; we are magically transported to the mountains via your words. The picture is nice and the author's note is informative. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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A wonderful poem describing in detail the natural beauty of the Appalachian Mountains. It is very well written; we are magically transported to the mountains via your words. The picture is nice and the author's note is informative. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Evi,thanks!
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a great free verse poem about one of the beautiful places on Earth. Your many descriptions are excellent. You should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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This is a great free verse poem about one of the beautiful places on Earth. Your many descriptions are excellent. You should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Paul, I am honored that your enjoyed this.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a terrific free verse. My favorite line is " boiling like a pot of grits." I was raised on grits so the humor was not lost on me, a colorful analogy for sure. This verse is wildly descriptive and passionately written. It is clear your love of nature. I read it many times and the images became more vivid. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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This is a terrific free verse. My favorite line is " boiling like a pot of grits." I was raised on grits so the humor was not lost on me, a colorful analogy for sure. This verse is wildly descriptive and passionately written. It is clear your love of nature. I read it many times and the images became more vivid. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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K.L. thanks and yes I love nature and free verse poetry.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Hi Rail, Thanks!
Comment from leather
This is a lovely poem- paired with a beautiful picture of lush forest growth. The poem is an easy read and full of descriptions and examples of the storm and plants. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely poem- paired with a beautiful picture of lush forest growth. The poem is an easy read and full of descriptions and examples of the storm and plants. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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leather, thank you!
Comment from GTG345
I great poem about nature and is very descriptive. It explains the whole scenery of before, during, and after a thunderstorm. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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I great poem about nature and is very descriptive. It explains the whole scenery of before, during, and after a thunderstorm. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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GTG thanks!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A very descriptive and colorful telling. The poem flows well. The images are clear and have a regional ring. The poem stays on point. The narrative flows well.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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A very descriptive and colorful telling. The poem flows well. The images are clear and have a regional ring. The poem stays on point. The narrative flows well.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love these lines so in tone with the weather in Edmonton:"Breathing cacophony, thunder resounds
around the hills and sweeps down the holler." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Love these lines so in tone with the weather in Edmonton:"Breathing cacophony, thunder resounds
around the hills and sweeps down the holler." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Iza, you live in a beautiful part of the world also where nature is on full display.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted a colourful picture here of nature and despite the weather, there is joy as spring brings life to the earth and this unique land has a special place in your heart. I loved your rich descriptions, the corn, the forest floor covered in colour, the chestnut oaks and dew, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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You painted a colourful picture here of nature and despite the weather, there is joy as spring brings life to the earth and this unique land has a special place in your heart. I loved your rich descriptions, the corn, the forest floor covered in colour, the chestnut oaks and dew, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Dolly, thank you, my favorite combination nature and free verse :)
