Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

It's good to see the team together again, even if this is book one. I love all the banter, and insults they throw at each other. When will Terrence arrive?He's one of my favourites. It looks like we are in for an exciting new story, and I can't wait for it to really take off. The descriptions of Roz's team would put the fear of God up anyone. Love them all. This is another excellent chapter, Mike, and a darn good read. Well done! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thank you, Sandra :-). You'll be in luch very soon regarding Terence. Darn it - giving things away! I'm really happy to have you following along.

Mike

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I loved the barroom brawl scene! I don't know where you come up with all those analogies of humor, but there isn't one of your chapters that I've read that I have not laughed at or at least smiled at. Great work, as always, Mike.

"Nuttier than schizophrenic squirrel poo?" Ha!!!

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thanks, John :-). My primary purpose with these stories is humour, so it's good to know that works!

Mike

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

So, a sort of kind of plan is set in motion. LOL I can see this story line taking on wonderful shape and I know it will be a lot of fun to read. I can't wait for more.

"How do you do!" Said a voice from right behind me. (lower case 's' on 'said')

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022

Thank you, Barbara - I knew there'd still be a spag in there! Sorta kinda is good going for this lot - let's hope they figure things out!

Mike