He Loves Me? or Maybe Not!
Feeling silly this morning with my complete fictional poem37 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Huge congratulations, Debi, on your well deserved win. It's a lovely poem, and takes us through the growing pains of 'he loves me -- he loves me not' I'm so glad I'm passed those days! Beautifully written, and I enjoyed it a lot. Well done!! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Huge congratulations, Debi, on your well deserved win. It's a lovely poem, and takes us through the growing pains of 'he loves me -- he loves me not' I'm so glad I'm passed those days! Beautifully written, and I enjoyed it a lot. Well done!! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You are always so sweet Sandra! Thank you so very much my friend.
Sometimes humor is much more fun to write about and silly gets me through a lot of things. Just like friends like you. Thank you so much for your very kind review and lovely comments! I appreciate it so very much my lovely friend
Comment from Bridge
A very well written poem. I love the humorous tone. I also absolutely love the rhyming. Congratulations on winning the contest...........
With regards
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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A very well written poem. I love the humorous tone. I also absolutely love the rhyming. Congratulations on winning the contest...........
With regards
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You are always so sweet Bridge! Thank you so very much my friend.
Sometimes humor is just more fun to write about and silly gets me through a lot of things. Just like friends like you. Thank you so much for your very kind review and lovely comments! I appreciate it so very much my lovely friend
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
So glad you had fun writing this because we had fun reading it:-) The rhymes and story of finding one's love we're terrific.
Congratulations on the win - we'll deserved.
A wonderful weekend to you!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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So glad you had fun writing this because we had fun reading it:-) The rhymes and story of finding one's love we're terrific.
Congratulations on the win - we'll deserved.
A wonderful weekend to you!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You are always so sweet Pam! Thank you so very much my friend.
Sometimes humor is just more fun to write about and silly gets me through a lot of things. Just like friends like you. Thank you so much for your very kind review and lovely comments! I appreciate it so very much my lovely friend
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It may be fictional, but it happens to many. We have to listen to our instincts. And women need to take up for themself. If not, men will walk all over you. Women think with their hearts. Men think with their private part. We do not need a man to take care of us monetarily. I remember doing this back in my teen years about whether he loves me or not. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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It may be fictional, but it happens to many. We have to listen to our instincts. And women need to take up for themself. If not, men will walk all over you. Women think with their hearts. Men think with their private part. We do not need a man to take care of us monetarily. I remember doing this back in my teen years about whether he loves me or not. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You are always so sweet Carolyn! Thank you so very much my friend.
Sometimes humor is just more fun to write about and silly gets me through a lot of things. Just like friends like you. Thank you so much for your very kind review and lovely comments! I appreciate it so very much my lovely friend
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Thank you.
Comment from Boogienights
Hahaha..this is funny! Its also kind of good thinking about the whole situation, I love this humorous take on finding Mr. Right. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Hahaha..this is funny! Its also kind of good thinking about the whole situation, I love this humorous take on finding Mr. Right. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much my friend and I truly appreciate your very kind review and words!
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
Sweet and sassy! This poem definitely deserved to win the contest! I remember doing that as a teen. Sit in the meadow and pick daisies to pick the petals off of, saying 'He loves me' 'He loves me not' over and over, one daisy after the next until I got the right answer. Hahaha. Great work! Kudos on your win!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Sweet and sassy! This poem definitely deserved to win the contest! I remember doing that as a teen. Sit in the meadow and pick daisies to pick the petals off of, saying 'He loves me' 'He loves me not' over and over, one daisy after the next until I got the right answer. Hahaha. Great work! Kudos on your win!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You are always so sweet Sam! Thank you so very much my friend.
Sometimes humor is just more fun to write about and silly gets me through a lot of things. Just like friends like you. Thank you so much for your very kind review and lovely comments! I appreciate it so very much my lovely friend
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on your contest win. This is a delightful, humorously funny poem that encourages you to continue to read to see how it would turn out. The final two lines cleverly answered the question of whether he loves you. HE DOES!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Congratulations on your contest win. This is a delightful, humorously funny poem that encourages you to continue to read to see how it would turn out. The final two lines cleverly answered the question of whether he loves you. HE DOES!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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You are always so sweet! Thank you so very much my friend.
Sometimes humor is just more fun to write about and silly gets me through a lot of things. Just like friends like you. Thank you so much for your very kind review and lovely comments! I appreciate it so very much my lovely friend
Comment from dragonpoet
Debi,
This poem of rhyming couplets fits the prompt well. I like the wit in it.
I was hoping she would just stop using the daisy and just get to know the guy before making a commitment she has to break.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Debi,
This poem of rhyming couplets fits the prompt well. I like the wit in it.
I was hoping she would just stop using the daisy and just get to know the guy before making a commitment she has to break.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Joan, you are cute! Since that girl doesn't seem to know any better than to peel a cob of corn, I guess she wasn't all that bright. Lol!
Thanks so much my sweet friend, and I truly appreciate your lovely comments!
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You are most kindly welcome, Debi.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan
Comment from dmt1967
'I've known him just a (of) couple days, but think that this will help
If he is not what he should be, I'll report the guy to Yelp' This just sounds better, in my opinion.
Congratulations on a well deserved win and thank you for sharing. Have a good weekend.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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'I've known him just a (of) couple days, but think that this will help
If he is not what he should be, I'll report the guy to Yelp' This just sounds better, in my opinion.
Congratulations on a well deserved win and thank you for sharing. Have a good weekend.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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And my awesome friend, I think you are right! I will go take a look at that in a few minutes when I am done here. I thank you so very much for your kind review and comments and I truly appreciate your helpful suggestion!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your He loves me.... poem contest entry, you executed it well. It was engaging and humorous. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your He loves me.... poem contest entry, you executed it well. It was engaging and humorous. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Hello there my friend! I thank you so very much for your very kind review and lovely comments. You are always so kind, and pardon me for saying this as I am a happily married woman, but lol, your handsome picture, tipping your hat and your always kind "good days", make me blush a little as you are such a gentleman. I am sure you have been told that by many women tho.
So thank you again my friend!
