He Loves Me? or Maybe Not!
Feeling silly this morning with my complete fictional poem37 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and humorous love poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive and cute words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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This is a very cute and humorous love poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive and cute words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Teri. You are always so gracious and find the good to say in every review. Thank you so much for that. I appreciate your kind review and comments my dear friend!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Structurally it falls short for me but the humor within has me awarding you SIX stars for having me laugh with your last two lines... Ask only "does he love me?" until there are no more, Then I know the answer is the one I've waited for
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Structurally it falls short for me but the humor within has me awarding you SIX stars for having me laugh with your last two lines... Ask only "does he love me?" until there are no more, Then I know the answer is the one I've waited for
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Tom you are so very sweet. This was a hard one to keep the rhythm with but if I got it started right, I could read it easily. Thank you for such kind words and I appreciate your fun comments. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from Fleedleflump
Haha, this was lots of fun :-). It reminds me of how many people approach life - skewing the odds so they get the answers they want to justify themselves. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Haha, this was lots of fun :-). It reminds me of how many people approach life - skewing the odds so they get the answers they want to justify themselves. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks Mike! I know you appreciate a little humor as I loved your last read. Thanks for all the fun comments and I appreciate your kind review and words too, my friend
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice entry in the contest. I hope you have had better luck in life than you had in your poem. When you find your daisy, count the petals before you start the jingle.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Nice entry in the contest. I hope you have had better luck in life than you had in your poem. When you find your daisy, count the petals before you start the jingle.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Paul, I love your humor as well. Yes, being married for 48 years, I haven't done the love me, love me not thing since about 12 years old. Thanks for the very kind review and fun comments my friend!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love what you did with the prompt, very clever and creative. The presentation is well realized and appropriate for the topic, which is relatable to all. I enjoyed the whimsical tone you injected into your verse. The rhymes work well without force and create a bouncy tempo.Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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I love what you did with the prompt, very clever and creative. The presentation is well realized and appropriate for the topic, which is relatable to all. I enjoyed the whimsical tone you injected into your verse. The rhymes work well without force and create a bouncy tempo.Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much KL for your lovely review and comments. You are so very kind and l appreciate your very sweet words. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good, very cute. Glad that you kept looking for a better man. I especially liked:
Ask only "does he love me?" until there are no more
Then I know the answer is the one I've waited for
(Author, we only deserve to be with people who treat us like we're #1 ...
'cause they love us. All the other Men (or women) can go and pick their own flowers and remain alone. Lol.)
A fun poem from a time when life was as carefree as a daisy. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Hello author, very good, very cute. Glad that you kept looking for a better man. I especially liked:
Ask only "does he love me?" until there are no more
Then I know the answer is the one I've waited for
(Author, we only deserve to be with people who treat us like we're #1 ...
'cause they love us. All the other Men (or women) can go and pick their own flowers and remain alone. Lol.)
A fun poem from a time when life was as carefree as a daisy. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Awe, thank you so much Margaret for your lovely review and as always very kind comments! You are so sotu sweet and I appreciate your fun words, as you gave me such a big smile!
Comment from John Ciarmello
I LOVE this one! It is original and clever! Pull off the (he loves me) petals only so you will know the answer. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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I LOVE this one! It is original and clever! Pull off the (he loves me) petals only so you will know the answer. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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John, you just made my night! I thank you so much my friend for your very kind and fun words. I think I'll be smiling in my sleep! Thanks again!
Comment from leather
This is an excellent poem for the writing prompt. I think you found a way to come out ahead in the daisy pull game. This was a fun read with a good rhyming scheme.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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This is an excellent poem for the writing prompt. I think you found a way to come out ahead in the daisy pull game. This was a fun read with a good rhyming scheme.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much! You are so very sweet and I truly appreciate such a lovely review and kind comments. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i like this smarmy, sarcastic, witty take on the prompt. I like the lines
pulled apart a dandelion, to see if it would work
If I should fall for him, so I hope he's not a jerk
I've known him just a couple days, but think that this will help
If he is not what he should be, I'll report the guy to Yelp
the best.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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i like this smarmy, sarcastic, witty take on the prompt. I like the lines
pulled apart a dandelion, to see if it would work
If I should fall for him, so I hope he's not a jerk
I've known him just a couple days, but think that this will help
If he is not what he should be, I'll report the guy to Yelp
the best.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Oh thank you so much Jake! As always you are so kind. It's so much fun to hear of others who like the light take on some of these prompts and you my friend gave me a big smile. Thanks so much for that.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this contest. I remember the days when men were the hunters, and some women were the prey, but most girls could handle themselves and good on them, I had two daughters so I was protective of them. This is beautifully written my friend, great couplet rhyming, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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This is an excellent entry in this contest. I remember the days when men were the hunters, and some women were the prey, but most girls could handle themselves and good on them, I had two daughters so I was protective of them. This is beautifully written my friend, great couplet rhyming, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Awe, thank you Roy! Sometimes it feels good to use a little humor, but not lose sight of the importance of being treated with respect. I love how you taught your daughters to demand that as well. Thank you so much my friend for your very lovely review and kind words.
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Good job
