America Repent
Let's Invite God back into our Country37 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are spiritual, clear, strong, an example, descriptive and creative. I found the name of this poem exactly what America needs to do and also the world. The words of this poem give an excellent example of bringing God back. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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The author's words are spiritual, clear, strong, an example, descriptive and creative. I found the name of this poem exactly what America needs to do and also the world. The words of this poem give an excellent example of bringing God back. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much my sweet Harmony! Yes, it has been on my mind for sometime to write something like this, as our country has kicked God out of everything. Even some Churches no longer follow what the Word says. Thanks so much for the lovely review and comments my friend!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic steeped in faith and hope and your belief is something that most of America shares, but not all, a powerful message in this write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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A fine acrostic steeped in faith and hope and your belief is something that most of America shares, but not all, a powerful message in this write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks Dolly, as I do appreciate that you seem to also see that America has been telling God to get out, and now that he is listening people ask Him why.
I truly appreciate your very lovely review and words my friend!T
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done acrostic. It reminds us of what we need to get back to so we can be a united nation again. We need to be more giving and less the seekers of power. Faith gives us ability to do these things.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This is a well done acrostic. It reminds us of what we need to get back to so we can be a united nation again. We need to be more giving and less the seekers of power. Faith gives us ability to do these things.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much Joan! I agree with you completely. When I think how it was while writing the Constitution, and then fast forward to today, I wonder how much more evil God will allow. Our politicians have been telling God to get out for so long and then people have the nerve to wonder where He is when things are bad. Thank you for your very kind review and lovely comments my very dear friend!
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You most kindly welcome, Debi.
Joan
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem with a very good sentiment behind it. It made me think and the picture suited the poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This is a good poem with a very good sentiment behind it. It made me think and the picture suited the poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you my dear friend, for the kind review and lovely comments!
Hopefully someday people will see that we can't keep throwing God out and expect our country to stay Blessed! Thanks again my friend!
Comment from Sally Law
I agree and join with you in prayers and intersessions. We are headed over the cliff as we speak. I pray it's not too late. Thank you for sharing this important message in acrostic form.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I agree and join with you in prayers and intersessions. We are headed over the cliff as we speak. I pray it's not too late. Thank you for sharing this important message in acrostic form.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you Sally for the kind review and lovely comments! You are always so sweet! Hopefully someday people will see that we can't keep throwing God out and expect our country to stay Blessed! Thanks again my friend!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a prayer that gears for America to repent.
The work highlights a prayer that is etched out of remote as well as the contemporary times for America's repentance; dutifully structured in the form of an acrostic.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with God as the protective covering of America.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a prayer that gears for America to repent.
The work highlights a prayer that is etched out of remote as well as the contemporary times for America's repentance; dutifully structured in the form of an acrostic.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with God as the protective covering of America.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you once again Lloyd for your awesome and fun review and comments. I always love hearing from you. So thanks again my friend!
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I always thought there was a separation of church and state? Here in the UK, we do have a state religion, but Christianity is at a low ebb nevertheless, and has been for decades.
None of this is about your poem, which is well written and clear, using the acrostic format to full advantage. You just got me thinking :-)
Mike
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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I always thought there was a separation of church and state? Here in the UK, we do have a state religion, but Christianity is at a low ebb nevertheless, and has been for decades.
None of this is about your poem, which is well written and clear, using the acrostic format to full advantage. You just got me thinking :-)
Mike
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Oh oh, that could be bad or good! Lol! I didn't realize that is how it is there Mike. I just know that God used to be welcome here. Now even some Churches are changing things to go along with lifestyles that the Bible says no to. People even can choose to be sworn into court without saying so help me God. When He releases his protective hand, this country will have more problems than they will know what to do with! Anyway thanks so much Mike for you lovely review!
