Is Love an STD?
How do you know about Love?40 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An interesting piece. The flow is good. The images are clear. The language is warm and friendly. The piece stays on point. The summation is as expected.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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An interesting piece. The flow is good. The images are clear. The language is warm and friendly. The piece stays on point. The summation is as expected.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Terry.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Scott Rhodie
One way to look at it. Love is without definition, and if it ever is, then heaven above, no more love? Nice piece. Usually read fiction, but in love where is the crossover? Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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One way to look at it. Love is without definition, and if it ever is, then heaven above, no more love? Nice piece. Usually read fiction, but in love where is the crossover? Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Scott, thank you for reading this little contest entry. Terry.
Comment from pome lover
lovely. lovely. and well put.
I like the creative ways you described love, insightful.
Love is definitely not a disease - unless it is allowed to morph into it, unhealthily. And then that is not really love.
Good luck in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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lovely. lovely. and well put.
I like the creative ways you described love, insightful.
Love is definitely not a disease - unless it is allowed to morph into it, unhealthily. And then that is not really love.
Good luck in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Katharine, Thank you!
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most welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a good commentary on love. I'm not sure about the statement love is not preventable. I suppose it isn't, if only the heart is involved, but I would never allow on my heart to make the decision. My brain has to have some say so in the matter as well. If not I would put it down to infatuation and move on.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This is a good commentary on love. I'm not sure about the statement love is not preventable. I suppose it isn't, if only the heart is involved, but I would never allow on my heart to make the decision. My brain has to have some say so in the matter as well. If not I would put it down to infatuation and move on.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Beth, Thank you.
Comment from Spitfire
What a philosopher you are. Regarding:When love is lost, it breaks your heart. But you don't need surgery. Did you read my free verse poem titled "Separation"? It addresses that situation.
Your brief dialogue about knowing you are loved brought tears to my eyes. It reminded me of how much my late husband cared for me.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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What a philosopher you are. Regarding:When love is lost, it breaks your heart. But you don't need surgery. Did you read my free verse poem titled "Separation"? It addresses that situation.
Your brief dialogue about knowing you are loved brought tears to my eyes. It reminded me of how much my late husband cared for me.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Spitfire, thank you, I will read your poem.
Comment from Elviss
This piece carefully points out the myths regarding love and the author shatters these myths with a more intimate perspective that love may be the ointment for the same wounds it is believed to cause. A solid stance!
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This piece carefully points out the myths regarding love and the author shatters these myths with a more intimate perspective that love may be the ointment for the same wounds it is believed to cause. A solid stance!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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A solid stance, but only a four...thanks.
Comment from Ulla
Aw, that's a lovely little piece about what love is and what it's not. I totally agree with you, and I hope it will do very well in my the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Aw, that's a lovely little piece about what love is and what it's not. I totally agree with you, and I hope it will do very well in my the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi,
Well, you hit hard and then slide right into to the cure. It's like a slap in the face from rejected love, only to be caressed back to the warm-longing arms of love.
A great start, and an even better finish... 'Because she took my hand, held it, looked at me, and said, thank you.' I love that line... and just a suggestion, the comma after 'looked at me and said' in my opinion doesn't need to be there. The pause is the thank you.
But that is just my two-bobs worth, and in the scheme of things does not take away from this well constructed little story.
All the very best in this contest.
With our thoughts we create...
added protection.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Hi,
Well, you hit hard and then slide right into to the cure. It's like a slap in the face from rejected love, only to be caressed back to the warm-longing arms of love.
A great start, and an even better finish... 'Because she took my hand, held it, looked at me, and said, thank you.' I love that line... and just a suggestion, the comma after 'looked at me and said' in my opinion doesn't need to be there. The pause is the thank you.
But that is just my two-bobs worth, and in the scheme of things does not take away from this well constructed little story.
All the very best in this contest.
With our thoughts we create...
added protection.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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James thank you, I will take a look at your suggestion.
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My pleasure... and it's only a suggestion. I thought your poem was witty, touching and had that ring of forever attached.
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I made the change, I think you are right.
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:)
Comment from tfawcus
I was drawn in by your provocative title and then enchanted by the descriptions you gave of what love really is and what it means. I loved that last line, Even when hearts are broken. Love heals.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I was drawn in by your provocative title and then enchanted by the descriptions you gave of what love really is and what it means. I loved that last line, Even when hearts are broken. Love heals.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I think your comment on love is very good and accurate. Your evidence of love is interesting and not what people usually say. I'm not too crazy about your title, but I wish you the best of luck in the contest about love.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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I think your comment on love is very good and accurate. Your evidence of love is interesting and not what people usually say. I'm not too crazy about your title, but I wish you the best of luck in the contest about love.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Carol, thank you!
