Let The Sunshine In
In sonnet style52 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jaybird1 a good day to you sir as always I hope this finds you well. Of course I enjoyed your work as I always do. I don't know if you keep up with the contest on here but this poem of yours would have been a good entry in one of the latest contest, uplifting poetry. Have a great day!
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Hello Jaybird1 a good day to you sir as always I hope this finds you well. Of course I enjoyed your work as I always do. I don't know if you keep up with the contest on here but this poem of yours would have been a good entry in one of the latest contest, uplifting poetry. Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
Comment from Christine Geyer
I loved this poem! It made me smile. It is good to read an optimistic and cheery poem in these uncertain times. The flow was nice and it was way to read. Great job
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I loved this poem! It made me smile. It is good to read an optimistic and cheery poem in these uncertain times. The flow was nice and it was way to read. Great job
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
Comment from Lobber
Hi my friend:
We all must face:
)life's highway,
one that's filled with storms and strife.(
I like your well-paced wisdom, and the kind and useful optimism in your line:
)A smile is better than a tear-
And makes much better things appear.(
- Lobber
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Hi my friend:
We all must face:
)life's highway,
one that's filled with storms and strife.(
I like your well-paced wisdom, and the kind and useful optimism in your line:
)A smile is better than a tear-
And makes much better things appear.(
- Lobber
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
I wish everyone would live by this poem. With the world the way it is we need more people to spread some kind of kindness. This is beautiful! Best, JohnC
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I wish everyone would live by this poem. With the world the way it is we need more people to spread some kind of kindness. This is beautiful! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
I love your philosophy Jay. Uplifting, thoughtful and kind. If everyone let their smile be their umbrella-we would have a much better world.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
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I love your philosophy Jay. Uplifting, thoughtful and kind. If everyone let their smile be their umbrella-we would have a much better world.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
Comment from karenina
Hello, Jay.
This brought back huge smiles. This is one of the first songs I remember my dad singing to me...in the car, as we drove in an unexpected shower on our way to a picnic I feared was "washed out.'
Here is a link to Bing Crosby singing this, on YouTube, should you be interested in giving it a listen...
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=bdtsCb51T7Q
I'm sure he's looking down at me with a twinkle in his eye!
Karenina
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Hello, Jay.
This brought back huge smiles. This is one of the first songs I remember my dad singing to me...in the car, as we drove in an unexpected shower on our way to a picnic I feared was "washed out.'
Here is a link to Bing Crosby singing this, on YouTube, should you be interested in giving it a listen...
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=bdtsCb51T7Q
I'm sure he's looking down at me with a twinkle in his eye!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
I like the pragmatic optomism of this sonnet. There is something so real and honest in the simplicity of the sentiment that is easily overlooked unless brought to our attention.
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I like the pragmatic optomism of this sonnet. There is something so real and honest in the simplicity of the sentiment that is easily overlooked unless brought to our attention.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I can use the sunshine, jaybird. It has been
a rainy day in New Jersey!!!
-You wrote a good poem about the importance of sunshine.
-It does make a difference in our lives.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Thanks for putting sunshine in my heart
each time you post.
-A very good closing couplet with a positive message.
-Have a good evening and rest of your week!!
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-I can use the sunshine, jaybird. It has been
a rainy day in New Jersey!!!
-You wrote a good poem about the importance of sunshine.
-It does make a difference in our lives.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Thanks for putting sunshine in my heart
each time you post.
-A very good closing couplet with a positive message.
-Have a good evening and rest of your week!!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
Comment from zanya
'A smile is better than a tear'who could possibly disagree with such an optimistic sentiment - this poem reminds us that life is truly beautiful despite the crises
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'A smile is better than a tear'who could possibly disagree with such an optimistic sentiment - this poem reminds us that life is truly beautiful despite the crises
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
Comment from Mia Twysted
So true. If people would smile and be kind to each other there would be so much more peace in the world. We have forgotten how to be kind to others I hope we remember soon.
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So true. If people would smile and be kind to each other there would be so much more peace in the world. We have forgotten how to be kind to others I hope we remember soon.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
