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Sun's Last Light

Sedoka

2 total reviews 
Comment from Fleedleflump
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This has a haunting beauty to it - love the colours spreading in the wake of the sun's passing, and the gentle descriptions of its setting. Beautifully written - I very much enjoyed this.

Mike

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
    I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Nice response to the writing prompt. My favorite phrase was "last lingering kiss," and "warm touch gone 'til break of day. You use very simple language to paint a vivid image. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
    Thank you for your kind words.