My World Came Aglow
Finding love together.3 total reviews
Comment from Kevin McNeany
What a beautiful piece of writing. Bigotry comes and goes. Let's hope it's in a downward cycle very soon. Love will always beat hate.
Best wishes, Kevin.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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What a beautiful piece of writing. Bigotry comes and goes. Let's hope it's in a downward cycle very soon. Love will always beat hate.
Best wishes, Kevin.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thanks for dipping into my portfolio to find that piece to review. I certainly appreciate your high rating for it!
Comment from Devine Writez
Awwww....you stole my heart...I'll share when your done continue to pay it forward. What a sweet little piece, a bit of joy I will take away. I totally see the topic, however, you made found a beautiful wae to define the love shared between two souls. Thank you for sharing some of the love you have managed to harness. The one thing that I truly enjoyed was the rhyming, it always finds a home in poetry that is a direct expression of ownership. Poetry is my way to describe what I'm feeling without having to relate it to anyone in particular. However, you brought some for all. Thx
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Awwww....you stole my heart...I'll share when your done continue to pay it forward. What a sweet little piece, a bit of joy I will take away. I totally see the topic, however, you made found a beautiful wae to define the love shared between two souls. Thank you for sharing some of the love you have managed to harness. The one thing that I truly enjoyed was the rhyming, it always finds a home in poetry that is a direct expression of ownership. Poetry is my way to describe what I'm feeling without having to relate it to anyone in particular. However, you brought some for all. Thx
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your wonderful review comments. I very much appreciate the high rating you gave my story.
Comment from Allezw2
Nicely done and the internal rhyme was well placed as an emphasis. Perhaps too much of emotion is attributed to a supernatural design, However, if it bolsters a belief in rightness, who is to say?
The emotion is there in your words and the illustration is fitting with the IDing bracelet and clasped hands.
Live long and write well,
Fantasist
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Nicely done and the internal rhyme was well placed as an emphasis. Perhaps too much of emotion is attributed to a supernatural design, However, if it bolsters a belief in rightness, who is to say?
The emotion is there in your words and the illustration is fitting with the IDing bracelet and clasped hands.
Live long and write well,
Fantasist
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your comments. I put God in the poem because it is usually the religious zealots who are anti-gay. I like to think God is love and therefore accepting of loving partnerships.
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Well put. Peace, Fantasist
