Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 106 "In a state of flux"Musings of an old man - 2022
36 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
This poem made me smile as I sometimes sit and watch the world go by myself. The world turns and, with each turn, it changes. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a good weekend.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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This poem made me smile as I sometimes sit and watch the world go by myself. The world turns and, with each turn, it changes. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a good weekend.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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I am glad you enjoyed this! Thank you~ I hope your long weekend is simply awesome!
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Dear poet,
I really enjoyed your message and agree with the philosophy.
You seem to have invented a new style of poetry which is delightful. You have some great rhymes while being more conversational in nature.
Let's all hope because we have 2 choices and 2 choices only...
Repeat or evolve
Best wishes in the contest
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Dear poet,
I really enjoyed your message and agree with the philosophy.
You seem to have invented a new style of poetry which is delightful. You have some great rhymes while being more conversational in nature.
Let's all hope because we have 2 choices and 2 choices only...
Repeat or evolve
Best wishes in the contest
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Smiling back🙏🙏🙃😋
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
This is very much a transience poem! Great entry for the contest. I felt myself drawn in and experiencing the ups and downs you describe. You use very descriptive language and have some fun plays on words. Best of luck in the contest, and good job!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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This is very much a transience poem! Great entry for the contest. I felt myself drawn in and experiencing the ups and downs you describe. You use very descriptive language and have some fun plays on words. Best of luck in the contest, and good job!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much? 🙃🙃🙃🎶🎶🙏🙏
Comment from John Ciarmello
So many changes in the world; flux is a clever little guy that sneaks through time and pulls it out from under us. After we get up and brush ourselves off, thirty years later, we stand alone with our little friend flux, wondering what happened. Great poem! I like the form.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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So many changes in the world; flux is a clever little guy that sneaks through time and pulls it out from under us. After we get up and brush ourselves off, thirty years later, we stand alone with our little friend flux, wondering what happened. Great poem! I like the form.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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John, thanks!
Comment from nomi338
Very nice. Change, I believe, is inevitable. As each second passes it becomes a part of the unit that comprises a minute, each minute an hour, each hour a day, each day a week, and so on, and so on. Although similar, each must be different because what happened at any given time may not ever happen again. Which obviously makes that event much different from what happened before or after.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Very nice. Change, I believe, is inevitable. As each second passes it becomes a part of the unit that comprises a minute, each minute an hour, each hour a day, each day a week, and so on, and so on. Although similar, each must be different because what happened at any given time may not ever happen again. Which obviously makes that event much different from what happened before or after.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Nomi, Spot on!
Comment from Sugarray77
An excellent poem, Jim. I enjoyed the flow and illustrative phrases you incorporated. The imagery is lovely and flows along throughout the poem making it a cohesive piece of beauty. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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An excellent poem, Jim. I enjoyed the flow and illustrative phrases you incorporated. The imagery is lovely and flows along throughout the poem making it a cohesive piece of beauty. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thanks my friend! Sure loving the class.
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me too. :)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a thought provoking poem in which you have cleverly caught the essense of the Ubi sunt 'philosophy'. I enjoyed it immensely. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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This is a thought provoking poem in which you have cleverly caught the essense of the Ubi sunt 'philosophy'. I enjoyed it immensely. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Katherine, what a nice review, thanks much! I hope you are enjoying Jims class as much as I am! See you Saturday.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ubi sunt poem does address the assigned topic in a very emotional manner, for your questions concern drastic changes and their reasons--all leading to the end of life as we know it.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Your ubi sunt poem does address the assigned topic in a very emotional manner, for your questions concern drastic changes and their reasons--all leading to the end of life as we know it.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thanks Janice!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR , a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Ubi sunt contest entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hello JLR , a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Ubi sunt contest entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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My dear sir, thank you so very much, enjoy the long weekend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I enjoyed reading your poem;
you did a good job with the form.
-I can relate to the sentiments you express, too,
-Everything does seem to be changing,
especially in our neighborhoods. I
think two years of isolation and Covid
have really changed attitudes and a
sense of togetherness.
-I also like all of the pronouns you use,
showing another aspect of this "new society" we are in.
-A good concluding verse, as well.
-Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I enjoyed reading your poem;
you did a good job with the form.
-I can relate to the sentiments you express, too,
-Everything does seem to be changing,
especially in our neighborhoods. I
think two years of isolation and Covid
have really changed attitudes and a
sense of togetherness.
-I also like all of the pronouns you use,
showing another aspect of this "new society" we are in.
-A good concluding verse, as well.
-Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Pam, Thank you for the good wishes.
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You are welcome!
