God Only Knows
Where I'd Be without her15 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful celebration of your significant other, written with meaning and flair. You found in the partner that which was important - acceptance and love and validation. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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A beautiful celebration of your significant other, written with meaning and flair. You found in the partner that which was important - acceptance and love and validation. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Luv u luv. Thanks for maintaining the path with my pieces of literature>??
Comment from Scott Rhodie
Personal and very special, and has hit all the right notes for the contest writing prompt. Though, the line - Calm, cool and collective - the first two words are very similar to each other, and say the same thing, but that is only an opinion. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Personal and very special, and has hit all the right notes for the contest writing prompt. Though, the line - Calm, cool and collective - the first two words are very similar to each other, and say the same thing, but that is only an opinion. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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They were the words from an ad campaign for Secret with Katy Winters and cool In this sense means like "The Fonz," or perhaps James Bond. Thanks for the read and kind words.
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They were the words from an ad campaign for Secret with Katy Winters and cool In this sense means like "The Fonz," or perhaps James Bond. Thanks for the read and kind words.
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No problem.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a well-done and interesting poem. The artwork you added compliments the writing and adds meaning. I enjoyed reading your work and look forward to the next one. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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This is a well-done and interesting poem. The artwork you added compliments the writing and adds meaning. I enjoyed reading your work and look forward to the next one. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Stop by anytime and often. I have thoughts to write on appearing from no where like today "boob-tube" came to mind and the phrase"Talk to me" is a spin off of God Only Knows. Stay tuned and thanks for the read and review.
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Stop by anytime and often. I have thoughts to write on appearing from no where like today "boob-tube" came to mind and the phrase"Talk to me" is a spin off of God Only Knows. Stay tuned and thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think we know we are in love when we just can't function without that person in our life, the one we love above all others, a fine write for the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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I think we know we are in love when we just can't function without that person in our life, the one we love above all others, a fine write for the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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I originated the contest because I write nearly daily and can only find a contest to enter if I create one for pieces longer than Haiku and 5-7-5 etc . Thanks for the read and review.
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I originated the contest because I write nearly daily and can only find a contest to enter if I create one for pieces longer than Haiku and 5-7-5 etc . Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from irishauthorme
Really well written! Lucky or Fate, You echoed my thoughts in this work. I had to try twice but finally found the "Right One."
The contrast still kind of amazes me, I see so many unhappy marriages, people who just stay together because of finances or some other reason.
My wife and I are going on 42 years together, and we still enjoy each other's company. Wow.
One thing is that we have so many common interests and we don't have any hobbies or belong to any organizations that require we go alone. We do everything together.
Thanks for sharing!
irish
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Really well written! Lucky or Fate, You echoed my thoughts in this work. I had to try twice but finally found the "Right One."
The contrast still kind of amazes me, I see so many unhappy marriages, people who just stay together because of finances or some other reason.
My wife and I are going on 42 years together, and we still enjoy each other's company. Wow.
One thing is that we have so many common interests and we don't have any hobbies or belong to any organizations that require we go alone. We do everything together.
Thanks for sharing!
irish
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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We,too,we?re forty two but added another three weeks ago. I never said I do until nearly 32 and she had turned 21st after dating a bunch of teens her mother suggested she find someone more mature caused she thought all she dated acted like young boys. Then she came home ten years after our vows from where she taught and I quote, After teaching young?s boys all day longI come home to the youngest boy I know. Nothing has changed. 😜
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We,too,we?re forty two but added another three weeks ago. I never said I do until nearly 32 and she had turned 21st after dating a bunch of teens her mother suggested she find someone more mature caused she thought all she dated acted like young boys. Then she came home ten years after our vows from where she taught and I quote, After teaching young?s boys all day longI come home to the youngest boy I know. Nothing has changed. 😜
