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My Beauty Treatment

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28 total reviews 
Comment from lindafisher
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Absolutely love this poem. The picture of the cat is also amusing. I found it very easy read as the rhyme and the flow were so well done. A very enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
    Thank you. Sorry to be late. Computer in shop for a week.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the ~ Here Kitty, Kitty ~ writing prompt contest.

Good rhyme form, doesn't seem forced.,. I like the cat theme..it's cute. Nice presentation. It's my favorite.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."-- Novalis

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much, Gypsy. I'm so glad you like it. It's a true story. lol.
Comment from jessizero
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This poem was adorable! I enjoyed reading about your kitty's beauty routine. I also liked the picture you included to complement the piece. Thank you so much for sharing!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    Thank you for reviewing! It's true. He loves his beauty treatments.
Comment from Sugarray77
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A lovely and imaginative write for this prompt, Yvonne. I love the premise that your kitty likes facials, hair treatments, and overall pampering. Come to think of it, I do too ;). Wonderful read.

Melissa

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    He really enjoys it and is starting to want before bed. hahahaha. Thanks, Melissa.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Damommy a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your here kitty kitty Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    Thank you. True story.
Comment from Pantygynt
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I always knew your best friends were your cats but is this taking things too far? A facial every day? I can just imagine my trying that on Paddy. The only after shave he would take would be called 'Umbrage' I feel sure.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    Actually, I just run a wet washcloth around his face, and scrub between his ears. He thinks it's something special. hahahaha
Comment from Bill Schott
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This cat poem, My Beauty Treatment, gives the readers the idea that somebody may be indulging the tabby in a way that cannot be reciprocated. Of course, I don't know, maybe it can.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    He reciprocates by loving me and making me laugh. Thanks, Bill.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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We have a male cat who likes a morning bath, believe it or not. I say he is just lazy and uses it for a short cut to a day of rest. Saves a lot of grooming time. Yep, He jumps up in the bathroom sink and calls for Rhonda to wet him down and dry him off. He finds it to be refreshing. Go figure. LOL Well done, Yvonne. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    That's great. PC does that for his beauty treatment. Aren't they precious!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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A true story! This is a delightful poem--skillfully written, very descriptive, and expressive. It carries a smile factor of 10 on a scale of 1-10. I love the picture.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    I'm glad it made you smile. He's quite a character. Thanks, Janice.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-Maybe Kitty could open her own spa;
it sounds like she would be good at it:)
-The "slight bouquet" would be a bonus, too.
-I like the closing couplet, too!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much. By the way, I was just watching on youtube about the Jersey Devil in New Jersey. Heard of it? I hope you haven't seen it.
reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Jun-2022
    You are welcome. Yes, I have heard of it, but haven't seen footage or documentaries.