An Invitation
Will she or won't she accept.2 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem. Your message is clearly presented. The font size is large enough to make reading easy. The visual works well with your poem. If I had two suggestions, I would bring the first line one or two spaces down from the bottom of the visual. I would try the blue color of the key for the font color. Well-done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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This is a good poem. Your message is clearly presented. The font size is large enough to make reading easy. The visual works well with your poem. If I had two suggestions, I would bring the first line one or two spaces down from the bottom of the visual. I would try the blue color of the key for the font color. Well-done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thanks for the read and feedback. I will consider your suggestions.
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You are welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
haha... what a cute way of getting an anatomical image across. Bacchus is a troublemaker. Hey feller - you'd better not drink too much or your key will droop.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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haha... what a cute way of getting an anatomical image across. Bacchus is a troublemaker. Hey feller - you'd better not drink too much or your key will droop.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the advice. I surely don't want to droop. Also thanks for the read and feedback.
