Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Hi Raul, wish I had another
6 stars to give you. A lot of
people should read this encouragement poem. It's
comforting to read and many
folks need comforting right
now. Have a lovely day. ~

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

i like it but ask you to consider editing line three stanza two, making it a question instead of 'be happy with what you have', perhaps, "if you're happy with what you have? Of course line two would end with a period and line three a capital letter. idk. just a thought.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

Thank you and thanks for your help! It is fixed. I'm glad you liked it.

reply by Tom Horonzy on 29-Jun-2022

It was fine as it was but I am full of suggestions for as I read, I do so thinking it was me writing the essay, poem, or whatever. ;-)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was uplifting, but I find it hard to believe that no one is against us. Other than that, I enjoyed the poem. I will try to cheer up.
Thank you for sharing your poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

Thank you! The phrase 'no one is against you' is a metaphor for a depressed person to feel better about himself and herself. It is to cure their blues. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Cheer Up, reminds the readers that you have not finished yet and any down time is another opportunity to regroup and zoom ahead.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022

Thank you for your review!