Whispers of Dawn
Spanish Quintilla poetic form45 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Sugarray77 a good day to you. I hope all is well. I enjoyed your poem and the style/format you chose. Great execution of your chosen format and great visuals painted by your words. Good job and good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hello Sugarray77 a good day to you. I hope all is well. I enjoyed your poem and the style/format you chose. Great execution of your chosen format and great visuals painted by your words. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hello and good morning. Thank you for your lovely review and comments. I hope you have a wonderful day!
Melissa
Comment from nancy_e_davis
The picture is lovely and so are your words describing the scene at the break of dawn. How nature finally awakens from a night of rest. You painted a lovely picture with words as well, Melissa. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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The picture is lovely and so are your words describing the scene at the break of dawn. How nature finally awakens from a night of rest. You painted a lovely picture with words as well, Melissa. Nancy:)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Nancy. I appreciate your encouraging comments! Hugs!!!
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this Spanish Quitilla poem. It's so beautifully written as usual. You described the art piece well. I like the variable rhyming pattern for each stanza. I even spotted one internal rhyming.
Exceptionally done and good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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I like this Spanish Quitilla poem. It's so beautifully written as usual. You described the art piece well. I like the variable rhyming pattern for each stanza. I even spotted one internal rhyming.
Exceptionally done and good luck.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hey there Lisa. So good to see your name pop up. I hope you are doing fine. I miss you in class :). Thanks so much!! Hugs.
Melissa
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I didn't know about the class. I was in Italy for three and half weeks so I have been busy planning and traveling. We will be in Los Angeles next week to visit our son. I really love Italy and wrote a free verse.
Comment from Heather Knight
Your poems are always incredibly visual. Besides you always choose the perfect photo. As I think I've told you before, when I read you, I can see what you are describing. That means you're a good writer.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Your poems are always incredibly visual. Besides you always choose the perfect photo. As I think I've told you before, when I read you, I can see what you are describing. That means you're a good writer.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hello Maria... thank you so much!! I am delighted that you could feel the sense of the dawn.. and day.. through the words. Hugs, my friend.
Melissa
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xxx
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done, Melissa. That rhyme scheme is interesting. I like it. The picture is great. That first stanza really stands out among the others. It could be a poem in itself.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Nicely done, Melissa. That rhyme scheme is interesting. I like it. The picture is great. That first stanza really stands out among the others. It could be a poem in itself.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hello Pul. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your thoughts on this piece. :)
Melissa
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You win. Where have you been. Daylight is more my favorite. Its hue are softer on the eyes since it edges forth quietly. Dusk is different. It has a glare to it and you need a visor to see the horizon until its crown goes beyond the horizon and that is when magic happens.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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You win. Where have you been. Daylight is more my favorite. Its hue are softer on the eyes since it edges forth quietly. Dusk is different. It has a glare to it and you need a visor to see the horizon until its crown goes beyond the horizon and that is when magic happens.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much Tom. Your words are so encouraging and I agree that sunset can be blazing, but deep twilight seems so soft to me. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this form of poetry and love the images of a lake at the dawn in the springtime with all the springtime life coming alive after a long and dark winter.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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love this form of poetry and love the images of a lake at the dawn in the springtime with all the springtime life coming alive after a long and dark winter.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi Jake. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :)
Melissa
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a great rhyming poem. One you should be proud of for a lifetime. I enjoyed reading your poem, and the picture fits perfectly. Nature is waiting for another day to follow the same routine. Thank you for sharing your great story.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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This is a great rhyming poem. One you should be proud of for a lifetime. I enjoyed reading your poem, and the picture fits perfectly. Nature is waiting for another day to follow the same routine. Thank you for sharing your great story.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi Carolyn. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :)
Melissa
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! This is such a gorgeous poem and I'm sorry to not be able to give it a six! I always love your word paintings from nature. You took us from dawn to dusk with the shifting colors and different sights and sounds in each phase of the day. The rhythm is perfect and the changing rhyme scheme was noticed but doesn't distract. Loved the assonance and consonance you wove into the lines. I think this is a winner!!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Wow! This is such a gorgeous poem and I'm sorry to not be able to give it a six! I always love your word paintings from nature. You took us from dawn to dusk with the shifting colors and different sights and sounds in each phase of the day. The rhythm is perfect and the changing rhyme scheme was noticed but doesn't distract. Loved the assonance and consonance you wove into the lines. I think this is a winner!!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi sweet Helen. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
You already know how I feel about this lovely poem. I think i would have mentioned the other two quintilla forms, copla real and single stanza in your notes, as they are all qintillas of a type.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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You already know how I feel about this lovely poem. I think i would have mentioned the other two quintilla forms, copla real and single stanza in your notes, as they are all qintillas of a type.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hey there Jim. Thanks so much. I am very happy that you introduced us to the Quintilla. Such a fun challenge. :)
Melissa
