Whispers of Dawn
Spanish Quintilla poetic form45 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Your vivid imagery was a joy to read. The silky words flow smoothly down the page. I loved the changing rhyme pattern which you have mastered beautifully.
Well done.
Blessings
Jy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Your vivid imagery was a joy to read. The silky words flow smoothly down the page. I loved the changing rhyme pattern which you have mastered beautifully.
Well done.
Blessings
Jy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi sweet Janet. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
Though your artwork is striking, your words paint a perfect picture, and your rhyme fits with ease and just flows throughout, " Whispers of mist upon the lake" what an excellent first-line setting the reader's mood, very well presented, and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Though your artwork is striking, your words paint a perfect picture, and your rhyme fits with ease and just flows throughout, " Whispers of mist upon the lake" what an excellent first-line setting the reader's mood, very well presented, and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi there Kim. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--very skillfully written, according to a set of strict rules, expressive in its blend of figurative and litral language, and vividly descriptive of how nature ushers day in and out.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--very skillfully written, according to a set of strict rules, expressive in its blend of figurative and litral language, and vividly descriptive of how nature ushers day in and out.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi sweet Janice. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow Melissa you painted such a wonderful scene with your amazing metaphors and your silky smooth metre, I so enjoyed this scene of calm harmony, a very skilled write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Wow Melissa you painted such a wonderful scene with your amazing metaphors and your silky smooth metre, I so enjoyed this scene of calm harmony, a very skilled write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi sweet Dolly. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from RodG
Wow! I am super impressed, Melissa, by how easily you handle the challenges of the Quintella, especially your varying rhyme schemes. I also love how you paint a vivid picture for your reader, PUTTING US THERE in this forest as Dawn breaks and we spend time with otters and doves throughout the day. Just beautiful!
Rod
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Wow! I am super impressed, Melissa, by how easily you handle the challenges of the Quintella, especially your varying rhyme schemes. I also love how you paint a vivid picture for your reader, PUTTING US THERE in this forest as Dawn breaks and we spend time with otters and doves throughout the day. Just beautiful!
Rod
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi dear Rod. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
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Such a great poem. You have inspired me to try my hand at this form. Rod
Comment from Fleedleflump
This had an almost relaxing effect on me - your imagery is strong but gentle and I love that some of your strongest lines are there to close your stanzas - harmonious togetherness, fog flung to the breeze, and dusky, fading lullabies (what a gorgeous way to close).
I very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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This had an almost relaxing effect on me - your imagery is strong but gentle and I love that some of your strongest lines are there to close your stanzas - harmonious togetherness, fog flung to the breeze, and dusky, fading lullabies (what a gorgeous way to close).
I very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi there Mike. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
I noticed the varied rhyming pattern, it seems similar to my prorhyme tesera, but without the concluding stanza. This is beautifully written Melissa as all your poetry is, well Done, skilfully mastered, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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I noticed the varied rhyming pattern, it seems similar to my prorhyme tesera, but without the concluding stanza. This is beautifully written Melissa as all your poetry is, well Done, skilfully mastered, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hello dear Roy. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
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Well done
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
What a gorgeous poem this is. So many beautiful images are present, and your choice of words is outstanding. This is what a poem is supposed to be. I can't help but think it will shine in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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What a gorgeous poem this is. So many beautiful images are present, and your choice of words is outstanding. This is what a poem is supposed to be. I can't help but think it will shine in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi there Verna. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful! This is a great entry for the contest. Very soothing and serene imagery presented in this poem that highlights the uniqueness of the Quintilla - with the rhythm of a Spanish dance.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Beautiful! This is a great entry for the contest. Very soothing and serene imagery presented in this poem that highlights the uniqueness of the Quintilla - with the rhythm of a Spanish dance.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi sweet June. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Well I for one am wowed
Not only is it a beautiful poem, your meter and rhymes are flawless making for a silky smooth read.
Really love the personification! It brings the reader in to get them more physically involved
My entry is very simular having written a modified Pantygynt Cycle which has a similar formula
You will do very well in the contest!
Take care
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Well I for one am wowed
Not only is it a beautiful poem, your meter and rhymes are flawless making for a silky smooth read.
Really love the personification! It brings the reader in to get them more physically involved
My entry is very simular having written a modified Pantygynt Cycle which has a similar formula
You will do very well in the contest!
Take care
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi sweet Katie. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
