Whispers of Dawn
Spanish Quintilla poetic form45 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Whispers of Dawn, is an astonishing capture of the otherwise simple happening which is the earth rotating around the sun. All that we see and feel are so well described here.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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This poem, Whispers of Dawn, is an astonishing capture of the otherwise simple happening which is the earth rotating around the sun. All that we see and feel are so well described here.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi dear Bill. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. So glad you like it. :). Your words made my day!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love Spanish Quintilla poetic form. If I was better at rhyming words I would try it. You have master it.
Your poem is full of Beatiful imagery. ... like haiku. You use sight and sound to immerse the reader into your word.
The Alliteration is wonderful too. Well chosen words.
I love everything about your poem for example......
"late twilight sings the blues"
Excellent entry for the
Rules Poetry Contest. Good luck.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."-- Novalis
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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I love Spanish Quintilla poetic form. If I was better at rhyming words I would try it. You have master it.
Your poem is full of Beatiful imagery. ... like haiku. You use sight and sound to immerse the reader into your word.
The Alliteration is wonderful too. Well chosen words.
I love everything about your poem for example......
"late twilight sings the blues"
Excellent entry for the
Rules Poetry Contest. Good luck.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason."-- Novalis
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hello Gypsy. Thanks so very much! I have had fun learning this new form and now we are on to a Nordic type of verse... this class is so fun. I hope you are having a lovely day, my friend.
Melissa
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It sounds like a fun class. I wish I had time to take it.
Hugs♡
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Well done Melissa. You have reached the end of the Quintilla challenge... Now we are going to be more challenged as we go on to more unusual things it seems. Kate xx
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Well done Melissa. You have reached the end of the Quintilla challenge... Now we are going to be more challenged as we go on to more unusual things it seems. Kate xx
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi Kate. Yes, my mind is still whirling with all of the variations we need to use in the upcoming verse. I copied Jim's verse from his portfolio to use as an example of form and meter. Thank you for the lovely review.
Melissa
Comment from country ranch writer
6/29/2922----12:49 pm
My goodness this is so beautiful a picture and the words tug at my heart once again bringing back fond memories from my pst. Well done my friend.
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6/29/2922----12:49 pm
My goodness this is so beautiful a picture and the words tug at my heart once again bringing back fond memories from my pst. Well done my friend.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Barbara. I am delighted you love it!!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
How beautiful is this! Love this staggered form of rhyming. I think I prefer it to the standard rhyming poem. A fine offering for my reviewing day. I ache for a six!
Sending you my best today as always, and a high five with compliments,
Sal XOs
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How beautiful is this! Love this staggered form of rhyming. I think I prefer it to the standard rhyming poem. A fine offering for my reviewing day. I ache for a six!
Sending you my best today as always, and a high five with compliments,
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Hi Sally. Thank you sweet friend for your lovely comments and encouragement!! I am glad I learned about this form... keeps poetry interesting. LOL
Melissa
