If I Had a boy Like Me
This is what I'd do.3 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
This is a beautiful poem from start to finish. There are things that only readers can know as to why a poem moves them. The beauty of your work is that it has managed to do that.
I hope your poem reaches thousands of people, and the one that needs it most. Good luck on the competition.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful poem from start to finish. There are things that only readers can know as to why a poem moves them. The beauty of your work is that it has managed to do that.
I hope your poem reaches thousands of people, and the one that needs it most. Good luck on the competition.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your kind words. Share if you care I?d be ecstatic with 50views.
Comment from Tyletta Staton
That was very thoughtful. I hope that you do eventually have a boy like you that you can cherish and demonstrate all those beautiful sentiments to. You did a really great job!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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That was very thoughtful. I hope that you do eventually have a boy like you that you can cherish and demonstrate all those beautiful sentiments to. You did a really great job!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Well thanks but no thanks. At seventy four breeding is a memory
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😂🤣
Comment from Ashley Redman
Beautiful. Taking someone under their wing. Prayer is the number one. God is good, all the time. Peace hold tight to. You can do anything with by your side.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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Beautiful. Taking someone under their wing. Prayer is the number one. God is good, all the time. Peace hold tight to. You can do anything with by your side.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2022
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He may be at my side but he is looking away hoping I decide to choose the right, day I and night out. I am easily diverted.
