Integrity
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Comment from lyenochka
Great job describing moral behavior in your well written nonet. I wish there would be a morality test that had to be taken in order to take any high office in government! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Great job describing moral behavior in your well written nonet. I wish there would be a morality test that had to be taken in order to take any high office in government! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review. (Yes, good idea. But sometimes they get worse after the level of power goes to their heads.)
Comment from LisaMay
Well done! Crafting a nonet is something of a challenge and you have delivered with ability, integrating effective alliteration. It doesn't feel forced. Your message is a clear summary of the characteristics of integrity, unfortunately ignored by so many.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Well done! Crafting a nonet is something of a challenge and you have delivered with ability, integrating effective alliteration. It doesn't feel forced. Your message is a clear summary of the characteristics of integrity, unfortunately ignored by so many.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you for a super review, and the encouragement and honour of six stars. Greatly appreciated!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only integrity existed in all walks of life, especially for those in power as the honesty would make everyone's life so much better, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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If only integrity existed in all walks of life, especially for those in power as the honesty would make everyone's life so much better, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Dolly. Great review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like how you personify integrity with many good descriptions.
-I like the first one the best as well as the last three.
-Good use of alliteration and a positive message throughout.
-Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like how you personify integrity with many good descriptions.
-I like the first one the best as well as the last three.
-Good use of alliteration and a positive message throughout.
-Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Many thanks Pam for your excellent review, very thorough and thoughtful.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Tyletta Staton
I really enjoyed this. "Integrity: holding hands with truth." That should be a motto somewhere. In fact, every sentiment says a lot. You did a really great job. Five stars!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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I really enjoyed this. "Integrity: holding hands with truth." That should be a motto somewhere. In fact, every sentiment says a lot. You did a really great job. Five stars!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your super review.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review, and also for your good wishes.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I like what you've created here. The nonet works well and there is a nice flow through the piece which speaks a universal truth.
Sadly, integrity, these days, seems to be on the wain, whether it be on site, in the workplace or in politic (although it's debatable if it truly existed there at all!)
Best of luck in the competition. A strong contender I would think
GMG
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hi there,
I like what you've created here. The nonet works well and there is a nice flow through the piece which speaks a universal truth.
Sadly, integrity, these days, seems to be on the wain, whether it be on site, in the workplace or in politic (although it's debatable if it truly existed there at all!)
Best of luck in the competition. A strong contender I would think
GMG
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your astute review. (Haven?t seen you around lately. Hoping all is well with you.)
Comment from Fleedleflump
Clever use of a Nonet to create that sense of coming to a conclusion, and I love that the conclusion is Grace - not just because it was my nan's name, RIP, but because grace represents all the better qualities of humanity.
I very much enjoyed.
Mike
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Clever use of a Nonet to create that sense of coming to a conclusion, and I love that the conclusion is Grace - not just because it was my nan's name, RIP, but because grace represents all the better qualities of humanity.
I very much enjoyed.
Mike
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much Mike. I appreciate your very encouraging words.
