Senryu (her heart is filled)
For Thou Art With Me5 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem achieves the purpose of transmitting an uplifting feeling. The power of prayer to comfort and provide 'a sense of calm peacefulness' is indeed healing.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Your poem achieves the purpose of transmitting an uplifting feeling. The power of prayer to comfort and provide 'a sense of calm peacefulness' is indeed healing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much Lisa.
Comment from jessizero
This poem (and accompanying Bible verse) is uplifting indeed. It evokes a feeling of peace. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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This poem (and accompanying Bible verse) is uplifting indeed. It evokes a feeling of peace. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the end results of prayer.
The work highlights a heart filled with "a sense of calm and peacefulness occasioned by prayer.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliterations, and a strict compliance with the humanistic aprons reminiscent of your professed Senryu.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the end results of prayer.
The work highlights a heart filled with "a sense of calm and peacefulness occasioned by prayer.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliterations, and a strict compliance with the humanistic aprons reminiscent of your professed Senryu.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you Lloyd.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
the last line gave me pause because I usually pray in silence! lol
I like what you did here and it fits well into that 5-7-5 formatting. You also have a good pairing of picture with poem.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Hi there,
the last line gave me pause because I usually pray in silence! lol
I like what you did here and it fits well into that 5-7-5 formatting. You also have a good pairing of picture with poem.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you Gareth!!
Comment from Fleedleflump
It's great when anybody can find a sense of peace, especially when they have a route to it they can rely on to work. You express this piece beautifully and I very much enjoyed it.
Mike
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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It's great when anybody can find a sense of peace, especially when they have a route to it they can rely on to work. You express this piece beautifully and I very much enjoyed it.
Mike
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you Mike.
