You're My Passion
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
There's a pretty good sense of passion bubbling under the surface here - you use sensory words like tasting and caressing, and then temper it with memories and lasting closeness. Very nicely done.
Mike
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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There's a pretty good sense of passion bubbling under the surface here - you use sensory words like tasting and caressing, and then temper it with memories and lasting closeness. Very nicely done.
Mike
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Tyletta Staton
That was really sweet. I particularly liked the beginning: You are my passion fruit,
I consider tasting you slowly. I'm sure your girl loved thi. Great job!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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That was really sweet. I particularly liked the beginning: You are my passion fruit,
I consider tasting you slowly. I'm sure your girl loved thi. Great job!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
